www.plainspeakpressreleases.com: Help for Companies That Want to Write Clear News Releases; Service Will Turn Jargon into Clear, Meaningful Information.KENTFIELD, Calif. -- For decades, the problem with press releases was that they were filled with promotional language that obscured the basic information. More recently, press releases have become so filled with jargon that even the most knowledgeable have a difficult time understanding the point. Now a new service, plainspeakpressreleases.com(C) (www.plainspeakpressreleases.com), has been created by TOBIN & Associates to help companies and organizations say what they want to say in a way that is clear, concise and easy to understand. Gary Tobin, principal of TOBIN & Associates, is a former daily newspaper journalist (San Francisco Chronicle The San Francisco Chronicle was founded in 1865 as The Daily Dramatic Chronicle by teenage brothers Charles de Young and Michael H. de Young.[2] The paper grew along with San Francisco to become the largest circulation newspaper on the West Coast of the ) and long-time corporate communications Corporate communications is the process of facilitating information and knowledge exchanges with internal and key external groups and individuals that have a direct relationship with an enterprise. executive and consultant. "It bugged me when I worked in newspapers and it bothered me when I worked in corporations," said Tobin. "It almost seemed that there was a perverse per·verse adj. 1. Directed away from what is right or good; perverted. 2. Obstinately persisting in an error or fault; wrongly self-willed or stubborn. 3. a. desire by companies and PR people to obfuscate To make unclear or confuse. See obfuscator and e-mail obfuscator. the message even when it was good news. "The growing importance of technology and the success of technology companies has only exacerbated the trend. Where a simple word or phrase would work," he said, "many press release writers inadvertently fall back on jargon or more complex wording that, in the end, simply creates a meaningless announcement. "Our services are easy to employ: We ask you what you want to say; what it will mean to people who read it, and why someone would care to get the information," said Tobin. "We then write a press release that communicates those core messages." The pricing will be as simple: --Press release creation, $500 and up --Press release editing, $250 and up The total cost of a press release will be determined by what form the raw information is presented (notes, written text, interviews, etc.), the number of drafts (and editing) required and the turnaround time (1) In batch processing, the time it takes to receive finished reports after submission of documents or files for processing. In an online environment, turnaround time is the same as response time. requested. "We have two additional services, Distinct Voice Analysis and Distinct Voice Development," said Tobin, "designed to help clients understand how their communications stack See protocol stack. up against the messaging of their competitors and how to create messages that stand out." About TOBIN & Associates TOBIN & Associates (www.garytobin.com) provides reputation management, corporate communications, strategic message development, public relations public relations, activities and policies used to create public interest in a person, idea, product, institution, or business establishment. By its nature, public relations is devoted to serving particular interests by presenting them to the public in the most and marketing/brand building services. The office is located at 929 Sir Francis Drake Boulevard Sir Francis Drake Boulevard is an east-west arterial road in Marin County, California, running from just west of the Richmond-San Rafael Bridge (where it intersects with Interstate 580) to the trailhead for Point Reyes Lighthouse at the end of the Point Reyes Peninsula. , Suite 101B, Kentfield, CA. Tobin can be reached at 415-256-9490 or via email at garytobin@garytobin.com. |
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