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Writing sample evaluations by students with and without LD.


Abstract

Approximately 200 elementary and secondary teachers evaluated a 6th grade student writing sample; only half were told the essay was written by a student with a severe learning disability. All teachers were asked to use the same rubric RUBRIC, civil law. The title or inscription of any law or statute, because the copyists formerly drew and painted the title of laws and statutes rubro colore, in red letters. Ayl. Pand. B. 1, t. 8; Diet. do Juris. h.t.  to grade the essay. Overall, results indicated that a discrepancy exists between the evaluated writing skill performance of students with and without learning disabilities.

Present Situation and Hypothesis

Developing writing skills is an essential component of classroom curriculum. Students master language skills at varying rates and progress is dependent upon numerous factors, teacher feedback being among the most critical (Lerner, 2000). Teachers' expectations of their students have been shown to play a significant role in determining the quality and quantity of output students produce (Mercer & Mercer, 2001). Of particular concern to a student is the climate, or socioemotional mood, created by the person holding the expectations, often communicated nonverbally Adv. 1. nonverbally - without words; "they communicated nonverbally"
non-verbally
; the feedback, providing both affective affective /af·fec·tive/ (ah-fek´tiv) pertaining to affect.

af·fec·tive
adj.
1. Concerned with or arousing feelings or emotions; emotional.

2.
 information and cognitive information; and input, suggesting that teachers tend to teach more to the students from whom they expect more (Tauber, 1998). Given the variety and multitude of messages students receive from their teachers, and the impact these messages may have on the depth of their learning, students with learning disabilities (LD) may be at a distinct disadvantage if their teachers have biased impressions or expectations about their scholastic performance, aptitude, or interest.

Given the difficulties that students with LD face in making academic achievements, this research was conducted to begin an in-depth examination of the relationship between teacher perceptions of students with learning disabilities and the nature and quality of the feedback they offer to such students. Given that students with LD typically master skills at a slower rate than their general education (GE) peers (Rodis, Garrod, & Boscardin, 2001), tend to require more prompting, guidance, reinforcement to progress towards mastery of essential concepts (Olson & Platt, 2000), and often continue to exhibit LD several years following initial diagnosis (Lyon, 1996), it is especially crucial to quantitatively determine the extent to which extraneous ex·tra·ne·ous  
adj.
1. Not constituting a vital element or part.

2. Inessential or unrelated to the topic or matter at hand; irrelevant. See Synonyms at irrelevant.

3.
 factors influence the academic achievements students with LD are making. Research clearly shows that "teachers' attitudes influence both their expectations for their students and their behavior toward them. These attitudes, expectations, and behaviors influence both student self-image and academic performance" (Alexander & Strain, 1978, as cited in ERIC, 1985, p. 1). Additionally, the Pygmalion Effect The Pygmalion effect, Rosenthal effect, or more commonly known as the "teacher-expectancy effect" refers to situations in which students perform better than other students simply because they are expected to do so. It is a kind of self-fulfilling prophecy.  [also known as the self-fulfilling prophecy self-fulfilling prophecy, a concept developed by Robert K. Merton to explain how a belief or expectation, whether correct or not, affects the outcome of a situation or the way a person (or group) will behave. ], or the idea that one's expectations about a person can eventually lead that person to behave and achieve in ways that conform to Verb 1. conform to - satisfy a condition or restriction; "Does this paper meet the requirements for the degree?"
fit, meet

coordinate - be co-ordinated; "These activities coordinate well"
 those expectations (Brehm & Kassin, 1996), is a powerful phenomenon and may be influencing the output they receive from their students, rather than the work (perceived to be below standard) being the sole result of LD.

Method

Participants

Teacher respondents were recruited from the school campuses of a large urban school district in California. A total of 202 teachers participated; 73 secondary and 46 elementary teachers with more than one year of teaching experience, and 83 teachers (combined secondary and elementary) with less than one year of formal teaching experience.

Instruments and Procedures

All respondents were given identical copies of a student essay along with a brief questionnaire asked respondents to provide information regarding their professional background, including years of formal teaching experience. Approximately one half of the respondents were told that the essay was written by a 6th grade student with a severe LD; the other half was simply told that the essay was written by a 6th grade student.

The evaluation rubric assessed 14 individual skill categories. Each category was addressed individually, and responses to each question were not contingent upon Adj. 1. contingent upon - determined by conditions or circumstances that follow; "arms sales contingent on the approval of congress"
contingent on, dependant on, dependant upon, dependent on, dependent upon, depending on, contingent
 responses made prior to or following each evaluative category. The categories evaluated were: (1) sentence begins with a capital letter, (2) paragraph indentation in·den·ta·tion
n.
A notch, a pit, or a depression.
, (3) correct punctuation punctuation [Lat.,=point], the use of special signs in writing to clarify how words are used; the term also refers to the signs themselves. In every language, besides the sounds of the words that are strung together there are other features, such as tone, accent, and , (4) correct spelling, (5) each paragraph starts a new idea, (6) each paragraph has a clear main idea, (7) each paragraph effectively develops the main idea, (8) correct and consistent subject/verb agreement, (9) descriptive language used throughout, (10) demonstrates a strong command of the English language English language, member of the West Germanic group of the Germanic subfamily of the Indo-European family of languages (see Germanic languages). Spoken by about 470 million people throughout the world, English is the official language of about 45 nations. , (11) proper verb tense, (12) responds fully and effectively to the given prompt, (13) interesting essay, and (14) neat and easy to read.

Teacher respondents were grouped into six subgroups according to according to
prep.
1. As stated or indicated by; on the authority of: according to historians.

2. In keeping with: according to instructions.

3.
 their years of teaching experience and grade level(s) taught. Initially, teachers were divided into the following three groups: secondary teachers (grades 6-12) with at least 1 year of formal teaching experience; elementary teachers (grades Kindergarten-5) with at least 1 year of formal teaching experience; and teachers with less than 1 year of formal teaching experience. Each of the three groups was then divided into two categories: either 1) they evaluated the essay written by a student with LD, or 2) they evaluated the essay written by a student without LD.

Data Analysis

In analyzing the data, individual category and overall average scores for each of the six subgroups were determined from a 4-point Likert scale Likert scale A subjective scoring system that allows a person being surveyed to quantify likes and preferences on a 5-point scale, with 1 being the least important, relevant, interesting, most ho-hum, or other, and 5 being most excellent, yeehah important, etc  devised by the principal author. Scores for the student presented without LD within each subgroup sub·group  
n.
1. A distinct group within a group; a subdivision of a group.

2. A subordinate group.

3. Mathematics A group that is a subset of a group.

tr.v.
 of teacher respondents were compared to scores of students presented with LD within the same subgroup of teacher respondents. Based on said comparisons, results were computed by determining the divergence divergence

In mathematics, a differential operator applied to a three-dimensional vector-valued function. The result is a function that describes a rate of change. The divergence of a vector v is given by
 between the average scores of the student presented with LD against the average scores of the student without LD. Positive numbers indicate the degree to which the student with the learning disability scored higher than the student without LD. Negative numbers indicate the degree to which the student with LD scored lower than the student without LD.

Results

Secondary Teachers

Of the evaluations of secondary teachers with more than one year of formal teaching experience, results suggest that secondary students (grades 6-12) with identified LD are perceived as having more frequent grammatical gram·mat·i·cal  
adj.
1. Of or relating to grammar.

2. Conforming to the rules of grammar: a grammatical sentence.
 errors in their writing samples, less coherent paragraph organization and thorough development, and less developed fine motor skills The examples and perspective in this article or section may not represent a worldwide view of the subject.
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 as measured by the degree to which their writing is considered neat and legible leg·i·ble  
adj.
1. Possible to read or decipher: legible handwriting.

2. Plainly discernible; apparent: legible weaknesses in character and disposition.
. Based on these findings, the frequency with which their academic grades are lower than their GE peers may be partially or primarily due to teachers' attitudes toward the students' disabilities rather than a pure, objective reflection of the quality of the work they have produced.

Evaluations show that the student presented with LD scored, on average, .25% lower than his/her GE counterparts. While this particular figure may not appear significant, further exploration shows that the degree of variance between the general and special education students (between each of the three teacher categories) further substantiates the above stated hypothesis.

Of the secondary teacher respondents, the disparity dis·par·i·ty  
n. pl. dis·par·i·ties
1. The condition or fact of being unequal, as in age, rank, or degree; difference: "narrow the economic disparities among regions and industries" 
 between the average scores ranges from -.16 points (out of 4 points total) lower than the GE student, to +.31 points above the GE student. The categories in which the student with LD scored higher than the GE peer are: proper punctuation (+.29), spelling (+.05), and demonstrates strong command of the English language (+.31). The categories in which the student with LD scored lower than the GE peer are: correct capitalization (-.10), correct indentation (.02), paragraphs start a new idea (-.02), paragraphs contain a clear main idea (-.07), paragraphs effectively develop the main idea (-.10), consistent subject/verb agreement (-.30), descriptive language used throughout the essay (-.06), consistent proper verb tense (-.16), full and effective response to given prompt (-.02), neat writing (-.02), and overall average (-.01). Of the teachers in this category, the scope of the disparity between the students ranges from -.16 to +.31 for a total difference of .47 points across the evaluative categories. In evaluating these scores, the reader must keep in mind that secondary teachers were not asked their discipline. This might have made a significant difference in the types of results received. See issue's website <http://rapidintellect.com/AEQweb/sum02.htm>

Teachers with Less Than One Year of Formal Teaching Experience

Of the teacher respondents with less than one year of formal teaching experience, results were strikingly different from those of the secondary teachers with more than one year of experience. In this study, teachers with minimal experience attributed significantly higher scores to the student presented with LD. While experienced teachers tended to grade students with LD on a relatively harsher scale, it would appear that less experienced teachers marked the same students on a much more lenient le·ni·ent  
adj.
Inclined not to be harsh or strict; merciful, generous, or indulgent: lenient parents; lenient rules.
 grading scale, overlooking many evaluative categories in favor of "padding Bits or characters that fill up unused portions of a data structure, such as a field, packet or frame. Typically, padding is done at the end of the structure to fill it up with data, with the padding usually consisting of 1 bits, blank characters or null characters. See null and bit stuffing. " the score so as to not (apparently) discourage the student.

The teachers in this category assessed the student with LD as, on average, .14 point above the GE student. Additionally, this is .15 point above the overall average score given by secondary teachers and .02 point above the score ascribed by elementary teachers. Of the teachers in this category, the scope of the disparity between the students ranges from -.09 to +.37 for a total difference of a .46 point disparity across the evaluative categories.

In this group of teachers, the student presented with LD scored lower than the GE counterpart in two categories: each paragraph contains a clear main idea (-.01) and consistent, proper verb tense used throughout the essay (-.09). In the remaining categories, the student with LD was shown to have substantially higher scores overall. The breakdown is as follows: sentences begin with a capital letter (+.16), paragraphs indented in·dent 1  
v. in·dent·ed, in·dent·ing, in·dents

v.tr.
1. To set (the first line of a paragraph, for example) in from the margin.

2.
a.
 (+.06), proper punctuation used throughout essay (+.28), correct spelling throughout (+.18), each paragraph begins a new idea (+.09), each paragraph develops the main idea effectively (+.03), consistent subject/verb agreement throughout essay (+.26), descriptive language used throughout essay (+.09), demonstrates a strong command of the English language (+.03), essay provides a full and effective response to the given prompt (+.35), neat writing (+.17), and overall average (+.14).

Elementary Teachers

Teachers qualifying as elementary teachers were those who had been teaching in grades Kindergarten kindergarten [Ger.,=garden of children], system of preschool education. Friedrich Froebel designed (1837) the kindergarten to provide an educational situation less formal than that of the elementary school but one in which children's creative play instincts would be  through 5th and had more than one year of formal teaching experience. In this category of teachers, the degree of the disparity exceeded the other two categories by .16 point, with a total disparity among all evaluative categories of .65 point. There was only one evaluative category in which the student with LD scored lower than the student without LD. It was "demonstrates a strong command of the English language." The student with LD scored .04 point lower than the GE peer. Other than that relatively low score, the elementary teachers appraised the student with LD with scores ranging from .01 point higher to .80 point higher than the GE student.

Common Patterns

Overall, the student with a learning disability scored surprisingly higher with all three teacher groups in the categories addressing proper punctuation, correct spelling, and interesting overall. Of the three groups of teacher respondents, the only category in which the student without LD scored higher than the student with LD was demonstrates a strong command of the English language, in which the elementary teachers assigned the student with LD -.04 lower than the student without LD. The teachers with less than one year of formal teaching experience assigned the student with LD .03 higher than the student without LD. Secondary teachers assigned the student with a learning disability .31 points higher than the student without a learning disability.

Discussion

This discussion focuses primarily on comparing the data collected from secondary teachers to the data collected from teachers with less than one year of formal teaching experience. The phenomena indicated by these results suggests that teachers with less experience evaluated the work of the student with LD to be of a higher quality than the student without LD. Although this may suggest that the Self Fulfilling Prophecy Prophecy
See also Omen.

Prosperity (See SUCCESS.)

Ancaeus

prophecy that he would not live to taste the wine from his vineyards is fulfilled. [Gk. Myth.
 may work to counteract the detrimental impact of artificially harsh grading systems, this set of circumstances presents an equally disadvantageous dis·ad·van·ta·geous  
adj.
Detrimental; unfavorable.



dis·advan·ta
 situation for a student with LD attempting to acquire new skills. Although this may initially appear to be incongruous in·con·gru·ous  
adj.
1. Lacking in harmony; incompatible: a joke that was incongruous with polite conversation.

2.
 to the primary tenet TENET. Which he holds. There are two ways of stating the tenure in an action of waste. The averment is either in the tenet and the tenuit; it has a reference to the time of the waste done, and not to the time of bringing the action.
     2.
 of this article, it is a close relative of the animal being addressed; namely, inconsistent and nebulous grading scales resulting from reactionary expectations of students with LD. Despite the positive feedback (established here as artificial) a student with LD may receive from a less experienced teacher, the educational implications will ultimately prove to be crippling crip·ple  
n.
1. A person or animal that is partially disabled or unable to use a limb or limbs: cannot race a horse that is a cripple.

2. A damaged or defective object or device.

tr.v.
. Specifically, students who do not receive accurate feedback addressing specific areas of strengths and weaknesses cannot determine areas of need requiring additional reinforcement.

Consider Jonathan, a fully included sixth grade student with dysgraphia dysgraphia /dys·graph·ia/ (-graf´e-ah) difficulty in writing; cf. agraphia.

dys·graph·i·a
n.
Impairment of the ability to write, usually caused by brain dysfunction or disease.
 (i.e., LD in written language) and an auditory processing disorder Auditory Processing Disorder (APD) (previously known as "Central Auditory Processing Disorder" (CAPD) is a disorder in how auditory information is processed in the brain. It is not a sensory (inner ear) hearing impairment; individuals with APD usually have normal peripheral hearing  impacting his ability to assimilate as·sim·i·late
v.
1. To consume and incorporate nutrients into the body after digestion.

2. To transform food into living tissue by the process of anabolism.
 spoken directions with accuracy and speed. He often requires prompting from his peers to follow directions within the classroom, and loses track of classroom activities easily, especially during times of great excitement or activity. Unknown to his GE teacher, Jonathan's LD does not impact his ability to express his ideas in writing, nor does he exhibit difficulty comprehending and recalling information read at his grade level. In fact, his reading skills are both measured to be over standard score 110.

Although his GE teacher is aware that he has a LD, she does not understand the specific nature of it nor does she make accommodations that address his particular needs. She has access to his Individual Education Plan, but prefers to make generic modifications to her curriculum and allows all of her students with LD to have access to the same materials. For example, she creates two versions of each exam, an "easy" one and a "hard" one. She allows her students with LD to turn in partially completed assignments as long as they have made an "honest effort," and she often uses a slightly easier grading scale when evaluating their writing assignments. She states, "Learning can be so difficult for students with learning disabilities, I don't want to break their spirit. I may be a little bit too easy on them, but they deserve to feel successful at least once in a while."

When Jonathon receives an "A" on an essay that is, in comparison to the rest of his classmates Classmates can refer to either:
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, worthy of a "C," he assumes the quality of his writing is as good as or better than most of his classmates. While the message he is receiving may motivate him to continue to persevere per·se·vere  
intr.v. per·se·vered, per·se·ver·ing, per·se·veres
To persist in or remain constant to a purpose, idea, or task in the face of obstacles or discouragement.
 in further writing assignments, he will progress without the benefit of accurate teacher feedback reflecting areas in need of development. Additionally, because the accommodations he receives are the same as the other students with LD, the standards he is held to are far beneath his current ability level. Consequently, he is not advancing at the rate at which he is capable.

In this study, secondary teachers evaluated the student with LD. 15 point lower than the teachers with minimal teaching experience, and an average of .16 point less than they evaluated the student without LD. The educational implications of this circumstance create similarly crippling educational options for a student struggling with LD. Expository writing Expository writing is a mode of writing in which the purpose of the author is to inform, explain, describe, or define his or her subject to the reader. Expository text is meant to ‘expose’ information and is the most frequently used type of writing by students in  skills are introduced and cultivated in the middle grades (6th through 8th), while they are refined and polished in the upper grades (9th through 12th). It is during this time that students rely upon specific input from their teachers to guide them in developing the minute details that determine the overall complexity and clarity of their work. Teacher feedback has a tremendous impact on student work.

An interesting trend in special education has developed in recent years. The passing of IDEA and its 1997 amendments has been followed by a sharp increase in the number of students identified with special needs, particularly those with LD, participating in GE classrooms. In this case, as with many sudden changes in legislation, the mandate preceded the education and resources necessary to accommodate the increased demands made upon GE teachers. Currently, GE teachers are called upon to make daily modifications and accommodations to classroom curriculum, often with inconsistent achievement from the student with LD. Many teachers now find that the easiest way for a student with LD to demonstrate mastery is by lowering their grading standards or diminishing the complexity of the curriculum to meet the perceived limitations of the student. Students considered to be of lower capabilities are "usually offered less exciting instruction, less emphasis on meaning and conceptualization con·cep·tu·al·ize  
v. con·cep·tu·al·ized, con·cep·tu·al·iz·ing, con·cep·tu·al·iz·es

v.tr.
To form a concept or concepts of, and especially to interpret in a conceptual way:
, and more rote rote 1  
n.
1. A memorizing process using routine or repetition, often without full attention or comprehension: learn by rote.

2. Mechanical routine.
 drill and practice activities than those in high or heterogeneous groups and classes" (Cotton, 1989, p. 2). If a student cannot earn a true "A," the teacher makes his/her job easier by reducing the curriculum and/or inflating the grade reported. This cat and mouse game creates an atmosphere where the student with LD is expected to achieve less than his/her peers, and the instructional content is "dumbed down" to the point that a student is no longer exposed to the rigors of a typical general education, nor is he or she privy One who has a direct, successive relationship to another individual; a coparticipant; one who has an interest in a matter; private.

Privy refers to a person in privity with another—that is, someone involved in a particular transaction that results in a union,
 to the same educational opportunities following an educational career reflective of the one just described.

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Boorstein, M. (1999, March 9). Adults with ADD. SouthCoast Today, B4.

Cotton, K. (1989). Expectations and student outcomes. Portland, OR: Northwest Regional Educational Laboratory.

ERIC Clearinghouse on Tests Measurement and Evaluation. (1997). Measuring teacher attitudes toward mainstreaming. Princeton, NJ. (Report No. ED289885)

Lerner, J. (2000). Learning disabilities: Theories, diagnosis & teaching strategies (8th ed.). Boston: Houghton Mifflin Houghton Mifflin Company is a leading educational publisher in the United States. The company's headquarters is located in Boston's Back Bay. It publishes textbooks, instructional technology materials, assessments, reference works, and fiction and non-fiction for both young readers .

Lyon, G. R. (1996). Special education for students with disabilities. The Future of Children, 6, 116.

Mercer, C. D., & Mercer, A. R. (2001). Teaching students with learning problems (6th ed.). Upper Saddle River Saddle River may refer to:
  • Saddle River, New Jersey, a borough in Bergen County, New Jersey
  • Saddle River (New Jersey), a tributary of the Passaic River in New Jersey
, NJ: Merrill.

Olson, J. L., & Platt, J. M. (2000). Teaching children and adolescents with special needs (3rd ed.). Upper Saddle River, NJ: Merrill.

Rodis, P., Garrod, A., & Boscardin, M. L. (2001). Learning disabilities & life stories. Boston: Allyn and Bacon.

Gaines is a master's degree master's degree
n.
An academic degree conferred by a college or university upon those who complete at least one year of prescribed study beyond the bachelor's degree.

Noun 1.
 candidate in Special Education at California State University, Northridge CSUN offers a variety of programs leading to bachelor's degrees in 61 fields and master's degrees in 42 fields. The university has over 150,000 alumni. It's also home to a summer musical theater/theater program known as TADW (TeenAge Drama Workshop) that leads teenagers through an . She is a Resource Specialist in the Los Angeles Unified School District The Los Angeles Unified School District (the "LAUSD") is the largest (in terms of number of students) public school system in California and the second-largest in the United States. Only the New York City Department of Education has a larger student population. . Ashton, Ph.D., is an Assistant Professor and Teacher Education Coordinator in the Department of Special Education.
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