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Power up your proposal: here's what it takes to get a potential client to say yes to your pitch.


You've got a top-notch product, superior manpower, and enough business acumen acumen Astuteness, perception, perspicacity  to rival your toughest competitors. Still, the best and biggest contracts continue to elude e·lude  
tr.v. e·lud·ed, e·lud·ing, e·ludes
1. To evade or escape from, as by daring, cleverness, or skill: The suspect continues to elude the police.

2.
 you.

Chances are, your business is popping, but your business proposals aren't. You may need to check your writing skills. It all boils Boils Definition

Boils and carbuncles are bacterial infections of hair follicles and surrounding skin that form pustules (small blister-like swellings containing pus) around the follicle. Boils are sometimes called furuncles.
 down to how well you can communicate your services, experts say. What can you do better than the rest? How much more value can you provide the customer? And, ultimately, did that come through in your proposal?

Proposal writing is a vital skill that many business owners haven't mastered. If it were up to David Pugh, every B-school in the country would offer a program on the process.

"It's truly a black hole in the business curriculum," says Pugh, who co-wrote Powerful Proposals: How to Give Your Business the Winning Edge (AMACOIVI; $24.95), a seven-step tutorial An instructional book or program that takes the user through a prescribed sequence of steps in order to learn a product. Contrast with documentation, which, although instructional, tends to group features and functions by category. See tutorials in this publication.  that attempts to fill the gap. Through their company, Lore International Institute, Pugh and partner Terry Bacon have been helping companies develop and win contracts for the past 20 years.

The biggest mistake business owners make, Pugh says, is leaving out important details. "The very DNA DNA: see nucleic acid.
DNA
 or deoxyribonucleic acid

One of two types of nucleic acid (the other is RNA); a complex organic compound found in all living cells and many viruses. It is the chemical substance of genes.
 of a proposal is that it is a sales document. You must describe the benefits and the features," he says. "Customers buy what [a product] will do for them."

A flawless proposal worked wonders for Maynard Smith, whose company, CAM Systems in Clinton, Maryland Clinton is a census-designated place (CDP) in Prince George's County, Maryland, United States. The population was 26,064 at the 2000 census.

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, landed a deal with the FBI in October 2004. CAM Systems is a contractor specializing in engineering, information technology, recruiting, and logistics. Over the next year, the FBI is paying Smith's company to recruit minorities for various jobs.

Smith toiled over his proposal for nine months and says a combination of cost, value, and experience gave CAM Systems the edge. Preparation also played a part. But Pugh says many business owners write before they're ready.

In fact, the plan outlined in Pugh and Bacon's book is intended to postpone post·pone  
tr.v. post·poned, post·pon·ing, post·pones
1. To delay until a future time; put off. See Synonyms at defer1.

2. To place after in importance; subordinate.
 the writing until the end. Ideally, by the final stage, the business owner is better equipped to begin.
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Title Annotation:CLOSING THE SALE; suggestions for proposal writing
Author:Gilliam, Stacy
Publication:Black Enterprise
Geographic Code:1USA
Date:Jun 1, 2005
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