NL/NL review sparks copywriter's memories of newsletter launch success story.The Oct. 15 issue of The Newsletter on Newsletters reviewed a book on tax deductions Tax deduction An expense that a taxpayer is allowed to deduct from taxable income. tax deduction See deduction. for small businesses and the self-employed. The review reminded me of one of my favorite My Favorite is an independent synthpop band from Long Island, New York. They released two CDs: Love at Absolute Zero and Happiest Days of Our Lives. My Favorite broke up on September 14, 2005, when singer Andrea Vaughn left the band. newsletter successes: Tax Angles, a financial advisory that targeted the same audience. The first DM package for Tax Angles dropped in the fall of 1977--exactly 22 years ago. Publisher Robert D. Kephart and founding editor and CPA (Computer Press Association, Landing, NJ) An earlier membership organization founded in 1983 that promoted excellence in computer journalism. Its annual awards honored outstanding examples in print, broadcast and electronic media. The CPA disbanded in 2000. Vernon K. Jacobs premised the product on a frequent complaint they had identified, which they dubbed dub 1 tr.v. dubbed, dub·bing, dubs 1. To tap lightly on the shoulder by way of conferring knighthood. 2. To honor with a new title or description. 3. "the businessman's lament": "I have two lawyers and an accountant. Still, I can't seem to get any new tax-cutting ideas. I keep asking them to show me ways to cut my tax bill. But all I get is sympathy and routine paperwork." That analysis of the prospect's needs and motivations served as my copy platform. I wrote an envelope teaser teaser an animal used to sexually tease but not to impregnate the members of the opposite sex. Usually males and they may be surgically prepared to ensure that they cannot mate or are not fertile. with this dramatic challenge: "Counting on your tax advisor A tax advisor is a financial expert especially trained in tax law. Some countries require tax advisors to verify the balance sheets of companies above a certain size. Individuals usually require tax advisors to minimize taxation, to avoid learning the details of tax law in to help you cut your taxes? If so, you're making the most expensive mistake of your life! Found out why--inside." The sales letter did indeed explain why: tax professionals are busy; their recommendations are usually cautious and conservative; they don't know Don't know (DK, DKed) "Don't know the trade." A Street expression used whenever one party lacks knowledge of a trade or receives conflicting instructions from the other party. your business and personal concerns as intimately as you do, nor do they care about them as deeply. All of which means: "You can't sit back and wait for your accountant or tax lawyer to track down the strategies and loopholes for you and tell you about them. You've got to keep yourself informed.... When you find something promising, take it to your advisor and say, 'Look at this. Can we apply it to my situation?"' Common sense? Sure. But two decades ago, this chain of reasoning was far from self-evident. Some brilliant thinking--mostly Bob Kephart's--went into the editorial and promotional planning for Tax Angles. (NL/NL's book review quotes excerpts from the Introduction that echo many of the points above.) Back to the sales letter. Having established the problem, the copy positioned Tax Angles as the perfect solution. For a nonprofessional non·pro·fes·sion·al n. One who is not a professional. non pro·fes , keeping up with complex and rapidly changing tax laws and regulations would be difficult and time-consuming. But there's a systematic monthly resource that's authoritative, up-to-the-minute, fast-reading, and written in plain English Plain English (sometimes known, more broadly, as plain language) is a communication style that focuses on considering the audience's needs when writing. It recommends avoiding unnecessary words and avoiding jargon, technical terms, and long and ambiguous sentences. . A long list of bulleted bul·let·ed adj. Printing Highlighted or set off with bullets: a bulleted list. examples of tax-cutting techniques followed. Tax Angles was an instant success. The launch test mailed to 20 lists and pulled an average 1.27% paid response, recovering 168% of promotion costs. We rolled out a few months later to 69 lists, this time pulling 1.01%, with 147% of costs recovered. Tax Angles swept the 1978 Newsletter Clearinghouse Awards competition, winning both for the newsletter and for the promotion package. Not surprisingly, the publication inspired imitators--some of whom duplicated our DM copy almost verbatim. Sidebar: When Bob acquired the newsletter, it was called Tax Tricks and Techniques. I suggested the name Tax Angles. That choice, everyone agreed, was shorter and snappier as well as a bit edgy--subtly implying greater creativity and aggressiveness in tax matters than, say, H&R Block. Tax Angles was subsequently sold and passed through a succession of owners. Renewing the subscribers proved to be tough, and I suspect that the market was hurt by the Reagan tax reforms of the mid-eighties, which created a perception that no more loopholes were left to exploit. But Tax Angles had a good run while it lasted. When DM legend Bob Stone wrote a long article about the newsletter in Advertising Age, he called it "the classic direct marketing story." Don Hauptman is a copywriter and creative consultant, |
|
||||||||||||||

pro·fes
Printer friendly
Cite/link
Email
Feedback
Reader Opinion