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Knowledge gap showed in recent war reporting: every editorial writer should learn to move, shoot, and communicate.


I was not a very good soldier. I should make that clear from the first. I lacked the natural instinct and envied those who had it.

I'll always remember the way Willie Griffin could tuck his pillow just so into his bunk to pass any bed check and then head out for a night on the town. He'd saunter in next morning, ready to move, shoot, and communicate--the three cardinal virtues cardinal virtues
Noun, pl

the most important moral qualities, traditionally justice, prudence, temperance, and fortitude
 of the artillery. After knowing Willie, I learned never to underestimate anybody out of VMI VMI Virginia Military Institute
VMI Vendor Managed Inventory
VMI Vertical Motion Index
VMI Valtakunnan Metsien Inventointi (Finnish: National Forest Inventory)
VMI Video Module Interface
.

I also knew I could never get away with something like that. Didn't have the soldierly sol·dier·ly  
adj.
Of, relating to, or befitting a soldier.

Adj. 1. soldierly - (of persons) befitting a warrior; "a military bearing"
martial, soldierlike, warriorlike
 instinct. I'd make some dumb mistake. To quote the officer delivering a critique of my day as battery commander: "That was Cadet Greenberg's fatal error A condition that halts processing due to faulty hardware, program bugs, read errors or other anomalies. If you get a fatal error, you generally cannot recover from it, because the operating system has encountered a condition it cannot resolve. ." The phrase has stayed with me, recurring with depressing regularity. Like when noticing the crucial flaw in the first draft of an editorial.

My only hope was to follow the book. Exactly. To the letter. The Army could teach a chimp to move, shoot, and communicate if he would just do it step by step and not get them mixed up. Which is what I did, with intense concentration. I knew it was the only way I'd make it through.

I must have been the most annoying safety officer at Fort Sill Fort Sill, U.S. military reservation, Comanche co., SW Okla., 4 mi (6.4 km) N of Lawton; est. 1869 by Gen. Philip Sheridan. A 95,000-acre (38,445-hectare) field artillery and missile base, it is the home of the U.S. Army Artillery and Missile Center. , Oklahoma. I was certainly a general pain to my superiors, who knew their men and their guns and were quite comfortable with a hairline hair·line
n.
The outline of the growth of hair on the head, especially across the front.
 flaw they knew wouldn't amount to anything. ("Good enough for government work.") And here was this shiny-green lieutenant asking them to put that in writing, sir, before he'd let them fire some harmless round out of the tube and be done with it. (I'd passed by a horrendous accident my first week at Fort Sill, and the acrid air of disaster and impending im·pend  
intr.v. im·pend·ed, im·pend·ing, im·pends
1. To be about to occur: Her retirement is impending.

2.
 courts-martial had made a lasting impression.) I never did get those orders in writing. Which was an early lesson in plausible deniability--a concept that came in handy when trying to understand Watergate, Iran-Contra, Travelgate, etc.

In the midst Adv. 1. in the midst - the middle or central part or point; "in the midst of the forest"; "could he walk out in the midst of his piece?"
midmost
 of the late and still sputtering A popular method for adhering thin films onto a substrate. Sputtering is done by bombarding a target material with a charged gas (typically argon) which releases atoms in the target that coats the nearby substrate. It all takes place inside a magnetron vacuum chamber under low pressure.  unpleasantness in Afghanistan, some of us old-timers were struck by how much has changed since there was a draft. You can tell by some of the questions asked at Pentagon press briefings and some of the stories that get into print. It wasn't just Afghanistan that was a strange and exotic locale for some in the press, but the U.S. military. They could have been writing for the travel section.

It was all new to these people, and it showed. You probably have your own favorite example of naivete na·ive·té or na·ïve·té  
n.
1. The state or quality of being inexperienced or unsophisticated, especially in being artless, credulous, or uncritical.

2. An artless, credulous, or uncritical statement or act.
 in print. Mine was the fellow who wanted to drop leaflets before a target was bombed to warn any innocents in the neighborhood. (Note to Taliban: DO NOT READ.) Or maybe it was the wide-eyed reporter who noted that Rangers trained with live ammunition! (Did he think they shot blanks? And that our armor trained in cardboard tanks?)

It wasn't the reporters' fault. They were from a different era, not one in which you were expected to go into the service at some point the way you were expected to go to school. And the reporting showed it. So did a lot of the editorial comment, which veered from gung-ho enthusiasm to utter despair with every report and rumor from the front--with no stops in between.

In the first, confused first days of the war in Iraq, we ran an apocryphal a·poc·ry·phal  
adj.
1. Of questionable authorship or authenticity.

2. Erroneous; fictitious: "Wildly apocryphal rumors about starvation in Petrograd . . .
 interview with General Eisenhower as it might be conducted today. For example: Fox News--"Isn't it true that the enemy has broken the rules of combat, and isn't it true that our men are fighting through tough conditions, and isn't it true that we're the good guys, and isn't it true that America is way cool?"

The New York New York, state, United States
New York, Middle Atlantic state of the United States. It is bordered by Vermont, Massachusetts, Connecticut, and the Atlantic Ocean (E), New Jersey and Pennsylvania (S), Lakes Erie and Ontario and the Canadian province of
 Times--"Sir, why haven't we liberated Paris yet? We've been at this for hours now, and Paris is still occupied by the Germans."

What was lacking was any first-hand experience of the military life, with its endless ennui sporadically interrupted by the need to get everything done now and then undone just as fast. It helps to have been at the bottom of the chain of command instead of having to comment on its workings as you would the doings of some mysterious corporation.

Looking back, maybe through the warped mirror of nostalgia, I'd nominate my time in the Army as the second most educational experience of my life. (The most educational, of course, was raising teenagers, and it was only a little more harrowing.)

I hated every minute of my time in the Army. Even the leaves were soured by the knowledge they would end. And yet the service leaves one with a certain perspective. You might even absorb a few principles of military "science"--not by the book but just by having to live with them: unity of command, the importance of maneuver, the element of surprise, getting there fustest with the mostest, not sweating the small stuff, knowing your objective and also knowing how to say "No Excuse, Sir"....

Some of those lessons may even be useful outside the U.S. Army. Every editorial writer needs to know how to move, shoot, and communicate.

Paul Greenberg, winner of the 1969 Pulitzer Prize for editorial writing
    The Pulitzer Prize for Editorial Writing has been awarded since 1917 for distinguished editorial writing, the test of excellence being clearness of style, moral purpose, sound reasoning, and power to influence public opinion in what the writer conceives to be the right
    , is a former captain in the U.S. Army and editorial page editor of the Arkansas Democrat Gazette. E-mail paul_greenberg@adg. ardemgaz.com
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    No portion of this article can be reproduced without the express written permission from the copyright holder.
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    Title Annotation:Symposium: media and the military: a changing relationship
    Author:Greenberg, Paul
    Publication:The Masthead
    Date:Sep 22, 2003
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