In letters and columns alike, less is more.Yesterday's mail brought you two letters that needed to be screened for publication before the morning news meeting. One letter was three pages long; the other, half a page. Which did you read first? Admit it: Our attention spans are under siege. Most of the time we take the path of least resistance Noun 1. path of least resistance - the easiest way; "In marrying him she simply took the path of least resistance" line of least resistance fashion - characteristic or habitual practice . It's the same for our readers, except their attention spans are shorter. Newspapers are fighting for readers' attention against some sexy opponents, including television, radio, the Internet, and other digital sources that provide information in tight, quick, easily digested packages. Newspapers' counteroffensive coun·ter·of·fen·sive n. A large-scale counterattack by an armed force, intended to stop an enemy offensive. Noun 1. counteroffensive has employed graphics, lists, tables, timelines, and digests. Magazines have made editorial content even briefer, hipper, and hotter. The mission is to attract readers. Why should opinion pages be any different? True, opinion pages have traditionally been the gray eminence Gray Eminence: see Joseph, Father. of the newspaper, with the emphasis on gray. They are the places where thoughtful readers gather, editorialists pontificate, and the writers append To add to the end of an existing structure. academic lettering to their names. And readers have been going right on past. Do we really want to write only for the academics and policy makers? Opinion pages must still include thoughtful commentary and in-depth analysis of issues, but it benefits no one to do that work in a vacuum, lob (1) See BLOB. (2) (Line Of Business) Refers to people, job titles and product lines, all of which pertain to a specific product or service area of the business. One is to get the reader to the page. We must use graphics, photos, lists, digests, and ... yes, shorter reads. Over the past year, we at the Visalia Times-Delta have installed many of these features on our opinion page. We have also insisted on shorter letters and used shorter columns as much as possible. We're now directing local columnists to write to four hundred fifty words. We prize syndicated columnists Inc.com defines a syndicated columnist as, "[A] person hired by publications or broadcast organizations to produce written or spoken commentary about specific feature subjects. who can get their points across in fewer than five hundred words. We edit columnists as tightly as we can without crimping the writer's message. We still run longer columns. One day a week, we devote the page to longer treatment of a single subject with pieces of up to twelve hundred words. Many of our readers still appreciate a sit-down read. We also want to attract those who read only on the run, because their numbers are growing, except among our readers. Is that dumbing down the newspaper? Not necessarily. Lots of eight-hundred-word columns would benefit from a rewrite re·write v. re·wrote , re·writ·ten , re·writ·ing, re·writes v.tr. 1. To write again, especially in a different or improved form; revise. 2. to five hundred words. Many columnists ought to take a break from their comfortable routines and practice writing tighter and brighter. It's not easy. Remember Mark Twain's observation: "I would have written a shorter letter, but I didn't have the time." Next time you are reading another newspaper, be sure to make note of the stories you stop to read first--in their entirety. You just might have to admit: Less is more (readers). Paul Hurley Paul Michael Hurley (born July 12, 1946 in Melrose, Massachusetts) is a retired professional ice hockey player who played 311 games in the World Hockey Association and 1 game in the National Hockey League between 1969 and 1977. is opinion page editor of the Visalia Times-Delta. When he submitted this piece to The Masthead mast·head n. 1. Nautical The top of a mast. 2. The listing in a newspaper or periodical of information about its staff, operation, and circulation. 3. it was 449 words. E-mail PHURLEY@ visalia.gannett.com |
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