Haggard's She: Burke's Sublime in a popular romance.
"Enchantment is just what this writer exercised; he fixed pictures in our minds that thirty years have been unable to wear away," Graham Greene confessed in "Rider Haggard's Secret" (Greene 209). J.R.R. Tolkien and C.S. Lewis also affirmed the spell cast by She--Tolkien in Henry Resnick's 1966 interview ("I suppose as a boy She interested me as much as anything" [Resnick 40]), and Lewis in a review of a Haggard biography: "His openings--what story in the world opens better than She?--are full of alluring promise, and his catastrophes triumphantly keep it" (Lewis 97). Lewis perceived a problem for criticism as being posed by Haggard, in that the man's style is often bad and his would-be profundities embarrassing, and yet something fascinates readers, namely, Lewis said, "the myth." Lewis believed that the mythopoeic myth·o·poe·ic or myth·o·pe·ic also myth·o·po·et·ic
1. Of or relating to the making of myths.
2. Serving to create or engender myths; productive in mythmaking. quality can transcend the defects of an author's words, so that a reader is moved, even so.
In his remarks in "The Mythopoeic Gift of Rider Haggard," Lewis hastens to discuss the archetypal ar·che·type
1. An original model or type after which other similar things are patterned; a prototype: "'Frankenstein' . . . 'Dracula' . . . 'Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Hyde' . . . figure of Ayesha, She herself, the immortal queen. Ayesha appears, however, only in the twelfth chapter of a book of twenty-eight chapters, and thereafter is not always on stage. Readers are likely to be caught up in the book long before this great femme femme
Slang Exhibiting stereotypical or exaggerated feminine traits. Used especially of lesbians and gay men.
1. Slang One who is femme.
2. Informal A woman or girl. fatale takes the stage. But Haggard has surrounded her with plentiful images and events that have intrinsic power. They partake of the quality, productive of imaginative fascination, a "delightful horror" (Burke 73), which Edmund Burke (1729-1797) called the Sublime in a treatise published in 1756. So abundant are these images and events that one could fancy that Haggard wrote his romance as a deliberate attempt to include as many of them as feasible; however, so far as I know, Haggard had never heard of the book, which Jacques Barzun said marked "the new cultural direction from Neoclassicism neoclassicism: see classicism. to Romanticism" (356); Haggard's tale must surely be one of the greatest artifacts artifacts
see specimen artifacts. of popular Romanticism ever written.
This article will offer representative images and events in She that could serve as textbook examples relating to Burke's Sublime. The italicized items that follow are taken from the list of things conducing to the sense of the Sublime, which appears on pages 58-87 of the Boulton edition of Burke's treatise. The page references are to Karlin's edition of She.
Most of the things listed by Burke are visual, but some are aural or tactile. The cries of animals arouse tension in the English explorers who witness a battle between a crocodile and a roaring lion (Haggard 68). The idea of extreme pain appears in this relatively early scene, as the agonized ag·o·nize
v. ag·o·nized, ag·o·niz·ing, ag·o·niz·es
1. To suffer extreme pain or great anguish.
2. To make a great effort; struggle.
v.tr. lion, struggling convulsively con·vul·sive
1. Marked by or having the nature of convulsions.
2. Having or producing convulsions.
con·vul , is gripped in the reptile's jaws (69). Also, Ayesha rules the dangerous Amahaggers in large part by fear, admitting that occasionally she condemns offenders to torture. The romance's narrator NARRATOR. A pleader who draws narrs serviens narrator, a sergeant at law. Fleta, 1. 2, c. 37. Obsolete. , Horace Holly, inspects sculptures in the "cave of torture" but refuses to "harrow the reader" by describing them (175). And the Amahaggers have a cruel method of execution of their own, namely placing over the victim's head a white-hot earthenware earthenware, form of pottery fired at relatively low temperatures, so that the clay does not vitrify (become glassy), as do stoneware and porcelain clays. Occasionally, earthenware is used as a general term for all kinds of pottery. pot (99-100).
The cries of animals are one aural source of the sublime; indeed, any sound of an excessive loudness may be productive of the sublime. Haggard describes a "frightful roar of wind" and a "shriek shriek - exclamation mark of terror from the awakening crew" when a storm at sea arises (51), and, a few chapters later, a crowd of disappointed cannibals that "thundered" in pursuit of the Englishmen who prevented their hot-potting a victim (101); but more awe-inspiring is the "grinding and crashing noise" produced by the preternatural, moving "pillar of fire" in the cave, the "womb of the Earth," where the secret of Ayesha's immortality is hidden (286-87). The opposite of loudness, silence, may also conduce con·duce
intr.v. con·duced, con·duc·ing, con·duc·es
To contribute or lead to a specific result: "The quiet conduces to thinking about the darkening future" George F. to the sublime; the Englishmen behold an archaic mausoleum mausoleum (môsəlē`əm), a sepulchral structure or tomb, especially one of some size and architectural pretension, so called from the sepulcher of that name at Halicarnassus, Asia Minor, erected (c.352 B.C. where "the most intense silence reigned" (173), and the explorers "did not dare to speak" in the precincts of an ancient temple where, over all, hovered "the dead silence of the dead" (263).
Closely associated with profound silence may be solitude, such as we imagine with Holly as he vividly imagines the scene, when he listens to Ayesha translate a wall inscription in the hidden land of Kor kor
[Hebrew kôr, from Akkadian kurru, from Sumerian gur, a unit of measurement.]
Noun 1. : "I gave a sigh of astonishment--the utter desolation depicted in this rude scrawl was so overpowering. [...] What must the old man [the last survivor of a plague] have felt as, in ghastly terrifying ter·ri·fy
tr.v. ter·ri·fied, ter·ri·fy·ing, ter·ri·fies
1. To fill with terror; make deeply afraid. See Synonyms at frighten.
2. To menace or threaten; intimidate. solitude, by the light of one lamp feebly illumining a little space of gloom, he in a few brief lines daubed daub
v. daubed, daub·ing, daubs
1. To cover or smear with a soft adhesive substance such as plaster, grease, or mud.
2. To apply paint to (a surface) with hasty or crude strokes. the history of his nation's death upon the cavern wall?" (180). Haggard has been careful to situate sit·u·ate
tr.v. sit·u·at·ed, sit·u·at·ing, sit·u·ates
1. To place in a certain spot or position; locate.
2. To place under particular circumstances or in a given condition.
adj. Ayesha herself in solitude; she has no consort until the Englishmen, including Leo Leo, in astronomy
Leo [Lat.,=the lion], northern constellation lying S of Ursa Major and on the ecliptic (apparent path of the sun through the heavens) between Cancer and Virgo; it is one of the constellations of the zodiac. Vincey, the youth whom she believes to be the reincarnation of her lover, arrive. She has ruled her empire in the heart of Africa Heart of Africa is an adventure game for the Commodore 64 and unofficial sequel to The Seven Cities of Gold. Created by Ozark Softscape and published by Electronic Arts in 1985, it casts the player as an adventurer searching for the Lost Tomb of Pharaoh Ahnk Ahnk in Africa for two thousand years, rarely seen even by her subjects--waiting, all this time, alone, waiting for her beloved Kallikrates to return to her.
The present inhabitants
The game is based loosely on the concepts from SameGame. of the lost realm of Kor could not construct its vast, monumental architecture. The ruins left by the vanished builders possess vastness, hugeness and grandeur, which Burke lists as qualities productive of awe and astonishment. Holly writes that he wishes he could "give some idea of the grandeur" of "miles upon miles of ruins--columns, temples, shrines, and the palaces of kings, varied with patches of green bush." Holly notes that these buildings were of "extreme massiveness" and were made with hard, durable materials, so that while the roofs have fallen in, most of the walls and "great columns still remained standing" (259). Similarly, Burke states that a sense of a thing's difficulty, the sense that some work required immense effort to accomplish, relates to the Sublime. The example he gives is that of Stonehenge. Ayesha shows Holly a series of caves that were worked, ages ago, by the builders of Kor. She says:
"Look upon this great cave. Sawest thou ever the like? Yet was it, and many more like it, hollowed by the hands of the dead race that once lived here in the city on the plain. A great and wonderful people must they have been, those men of Kor, but, like the Egyptians, they thought more of the dead than of the living. How many men, thinkest thou, working for how many years, did it need to the hollowing out this cave and all the galleries thereof?" (177)
Holly can only answer, subdued, "Tens of thousands" (177-178). One may wonder, in passing, if Tolkien's dwarves dwarves
A plural of dwarf. , and their immense underground realms, might owe something to the doomed inhabitants of Kor (a name, incidentally, which Tolkien borrowed in the creation of his early legendarium; see the two Books of Lost Tales). There are many other examples of such scenes of decayed splendor in She.
Burke allocates the concept of power to natural phenomena when he mentions that of wild animals WILD ANIMALS. Animals in a state of nature; animals ferae naturae. Vide Animals; Ferae naturae. or the violence of earthquakes, floods, etc.; and he also mentions human beings, if they have "prodigious strength." Ayesha possesses the ability to "blast" her enemies by means of some mysterious force of nature that she controls (207). Eventually she exerts this power in order to strike dead Ustane, Leo's "wife," by pointing at her. Holly surmises that "some mysterious electric agency or overwhelming will-force" was harnessed (227).
Considering the three spatial dimensions, Burke considers width the least impressive, height more impressive, and depth the most able to provoke a sense of the Sublime. As an example of width, ancient walls and columns extend to one's left and right in the ruins of Kor. Representing height, a rather grotesque, towering pile, formed by skeletal remains, thrown down from an opening above the Englishman's viewpoint throughout centuries, receives Holly's inspection; in his amazement, he exclaims, and his outburst starts an avalanche of bones moving towards the spectators (182). Haggard saves his greatest picture of depth for the climax of the story, when the surviving Englishmen, trying to make their way from the subterranean Place of Life where Ayesha has died (the sight of her terrible death having also stricken the English servant, Job, dead), must leap eleven or twelve feet across a "bottomless" chasm, from which wind blows. Probably the scene affected Tolkien's conception of the Bridge of Khazad-Dum where Gandalf falls into darkness (The Fellowship of the Ring, Book II, Chapter 5). Holly's leap falls short, but Leo, who jumped first, seizes his right wrist and hauls him up.
"And then ... the light went out" (306)! This brings us to darkness, gloom, night, obscurity, over which Burke dwells with much emphasis. He asserts that a clear idea is a little idea; for a sense of dread, terror, and astonishment, some kind of obscurity is necessary. Like Charles Lamb, in "Witches and Other Night-Fears" (written later than Burke's treatise), Burke holds that darkness is the habitation HABITATION, civil law. It was the right of a person to live in the house of another without prejudice to the property.
2. It differed from a usufruct in this, that the usufructuary might have applied the house to any purpose, as, a store or manufactory; whereas of ghosts and goblins because of its terror, rather than being terrifying because it is the place of such phantoms (Burke 144). Accordingly, because darkness arouses dread, Haggard has made Ayesha to dwell in to abide in (a place); hence, to depend on.
See also: Dwell a gloomy realm. One could adduce To present, offer, bring forward, or introduce.
For example, a bill of particulars that lists each of the plaintiff's demands may recite that it contains all the evidence to be adduced at trial. dozens of passages in She in which darkness is emphasized, since much of Kor is a subterranean realm, which must be lit by torches--sometimes made of conventional materials, but, on special occasions, by blazing mummies (218-219)!
When Ayesha leads the Englishmen to the Place of Life, they come to a "view that was positively appalling in its gloom and grandeur":
Before us was a mighty chasm in the black rock, jagged and torn and splintered through it in a far past age by some awful convulsion of Nature, as though it had been cleft by stroke upon stroke of the lightning. [...] It was impossible to make out much of its outline, or how far it ran, for the simple reason that the point where we were standing was so far from the upper surface of the cliff, at least fifteen hundred to two thousand feet, that only a very dim light struggled down to us from above. (271)
A more subtle example of the power of the visually obscure: the first time Ayesha is present in the story, Holly is aware she is behind some curtains; he cannot see her, but he senses that she is there, studying him. "Minute grew into minute, and still there was no sign of life, nor did the curtain move; but I felt the gaze of the unknown being sinking through and through me, and filling me with a nameless terror, till the perspiration stood in beads upon my brow" (141).
This article has not related each and every one of the things Burke listed to She; notably, his inclusion of horrible stenches. Burke grants that "whatever is in any sort terrible [...] is a source of the sublime" (39), including such "odious" things as snakes and spiders (57, 86), but he concentrates on things that, "at certain distances," arouse dread or awe (40), rather than disgusted alarm, and so does Haggard himself.
Perhaps I may be permitted to offer, instead, one thing that Burke didn't mention, namely the thought of great depths of time. Haggard's romance is drenched in a sense of antiquity; Ayesha, herself over two millennia old, rules in ruins that were thousands of years old when she arrived. In "On Fairy-stories," Tolkien mentions as a perennial human desire--one aspect of our yearning for wonders--the desire to "survey" vast tracts of time. (See his remarks on Wells's The Time Machine in the section titled "Fairy-story.") Readers of The Lord of the Rings will hardly need to be reminded of the habit that the inhabitants of Middle-earth, in the late Third Age, have of recalling the elder days before them, and, of course, they themselves are remote from us in time. Tolkien told Henry Resnick that the "Greek shard of Amynatas [sic; Amenartas]" in Haggard's tale appealed to him as a device "by which everything got moving" (Resnick 40). It is, surely, Holly and Vincey's suspenseful examination of this mysterious object that Lewis had in mind when he praised the book's opening. Haggard provides the reader with transcriptions, taken from the potsherd pot·sherd also pot·shard
A fragment of broken pottery, especially one found in an archaeological excavation.
a broken piece of pottery [pot + schoord , which has been passed down through many generations of Vincey's family, of classical Greek, Latin, medieval English, and more recent inscriptions, taking up several pages of the third chapter. (He received expert antiquarian an·ti·quar·i·an
One who studies, collects, or deals in antiquities.
1. Of or relating to antiquarians or to the study or collecting of antiquities.
2. Dealing in or having to do with old or rare books. help from Dr. Hubert Holden and Dr. John Raven, according to Daniel Karlin's introduction to the World's Classics edition of She.) The linking of ancientness with exotic languages is, surely, something that would have appealed to Tolkien--and it may well be that it helped to inspire his conception of the testament of Isildur about the Ring, in Book II, Chapter 2 of The Fellowship of the Ring.
While many readers will agree with Lewis that the idea of Ayesha, She Who Must Be Obeyed She Who Must Be Obeyed may refer to:
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adventure tale of journey into heart of the Belgian Congo and into depths of man’s heart. [Br. Lit.: Heart of Darkness, Magill III, 447–449]
See : Journey ), James (The Turn of the Screw), or even, perhaps, scenes of hastily run-up modern cities being overtaken by "the bush" in some pages of V. S. Naipaul Sir Vidiadhar Surajprasad Naipaul, KB, TC (b. August 17 1932, Chaguanas, Trinidad and Tobago), better known as V. S. Naipaul, is a Trinidadian-born British writer of Indo-Trinidadian descent, currently resident in Wiltshire. describing scenes in the interior of Africa (e.g. in A Bend in the River). But Greene wanted the enchantment produced by popular writers such as Haggard also to be remembered. Burke's recognition of the appeal of the Sublime helps to explain the continuing appreciation of readers, including ones who possess wide literary experience, for writers of popular, even pulp, Romanticism, such as Haggard, Hodgson, Lovecraft, and countless other writers of fantasy and science fiction--and, moreover, persuades us that what actually draws readers to some works of admittedly high literary quality may often include the unacknowledged ingredient of the Sublime.
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