Drumroll, please ... Instructor announces the winners of the Sixth Annual Poetry Contest.Ring the bells, raise the flags, shout from the rooftops--it's time to announce the winners of Instructor's Sixth Annual Poetry Contest! This is the third year that I've had the privilege of sitting on the judging panel--and it is still a huge thrill. The 2005 contest brought a blizzard of more than 10,000 entries in English and Spanish. There were so many poems, in fact, that we required a team of word-loving editors and a conference room large enough to accommodate us and our overflowing mail tubs! We also enlisted the help of bilingual poet Alexis Romay, who selected and translated the Spanish finalists. Together, we all spent days carefully reading to winnow See chaff and winnow. the winners' circle to four grand-prize recipients (poems featured on the enclosed poster) and 20 stunning runners-up (poems featured at www.scholastic.com/instructor). [ILLUSTRATION OMITTED] The Art of Teaching Poetry In this age of high-stakes testing A high-stakes test is an assessment which has important consequences for the test taker. If the examinee passes the test, then the examinee may receive significant benefits, such as a high school diploma or a license to practice law. , it's gratifying grat·i·fy tr.v. grat·i·fied, grat·i·fy·ing, grat·i·fies 1. To please or satisfy: His achievement gratified his father. See Synonyms at please. 2. that so many educators make time to spread the joy of poetry. These behind-the-scenes mentors inspired and guided the authors of each masterpiece that we so relished. Mentors like Tamara Alexander of Esperanza Elementary School Esperanza Elementary School is a school located in Palmdale, CA. Esperanza is part of the Westside Union School District. The school first opened in the 2003-2004 school year. The school's mascot is the Golden Eagles, as voted by the 2003-2004 school year students. in Farmington, New Mexico Farmington (Navajo: Tótah) is a city in San Juan County, New Mexico, United States. As of the 2000 census, the city had a total population of 37,844. The Census Bureau's 2006 population estimate for the city is 43,573. . She coached our youngest finalist, first-grader Robby Maes, and provided him with the tools to craft his tiny gem on the topic of Mount Fuji. How did she do it? By inviting Robby to draw a picture of his idea, then use it as a visual springboard to ignite his writing. In addition, she makes certain that all her students are exposed to a steady stream of popular poetry, classic verse, and good old nursery rhymes nursery rhymes, verses, generally brief and usually anonymous, for children. The best-known examples are in English and date mostly from the 17th cent. A popular type of rhyme is used in "counting-out" games, e.g., "Eenie, meenie, minie, mo. . "In first grade, it's so important to play with sound and build phonemic awareness Phonemic Awareness is a subset of phonological awareness in which listeners are able to distinguish phonemes, the smallest units of sound that can differentiate meaning. For example, a listener with phonemic awareness can break the word "Cat" into three separate phonemes: /k/, /a/, . We do poetry every day," she says. "Lots of poetry is key," concurs Lois Huber. A teacher at Village Elementary School elementary school: see school. in Princeton Junction, New Jersey Princeton Junction is also a New Jersey Transit and Amtrak station on the Northeast Corridor line. Princeton Junction is a census-designated place and unincorporated area located within West Windsor Township, in Mercer County, New Jersey. , Huber served as poetry coach to fifth-grade finalist, Michael Liu. Her dedication and practical approach helped bring about his moving memoir about Chinese tradition. "I love poetry!" she says enthusiastically. But she is also quick to point out that creative writing is a serious endeavor. Her students take their poems through every step in the writing process and sometimes create up to ten drafts to get them in tip-top form. "I tell kids, 'You've got to write something that has meaning. You've got to reach out and grab the reader by the lapels,'" she laughs. Now, let's take a look at the grand-prize winning poems. Grade K-3 Winner (English): "Don't Worry" Like an intricate painting on the head of a pin, this haiku haiku (hī`k ), an unrhymed Japanese poem recording the essence of a moment keenly perceived, in which nature is linked to human nature. by first-grader Robby Maes is a small wonder! In it, Japan's Mount Fuji volcano erupts and a ladybug ladybugor ladybird beetle Any of the approximately 5,000 widely distributed beetles of the family Coccinellidae. The name originated in the Middle Ages, when the beetle was dedicated to the Virgin Mary and called “beetle of Our Lady. comforts a bear by telling him "we're safe." That little ladybug is surprisingly mighty--as is this 16-word poem, which paints a vivid picture in the reader's minds eye. Although Robby chose to forgo the traditional 5-7-5 syllabification syl·lab·i·fy or syl·lab·i·cate tr.v. syl·lab·i·fied or syl·lab·i·cat·ed, syl·lab·i·fy·ing or syl·lab·i·cat·ing, syl·lab·i·fies or syl·lab·i·cates To form or divide into syllables. of a standard haiku, "Don't Worry" still qualifies because it contains two important attributes of the form: The story unfolds in a mere three lines and focuses on an instantaneous event in nature. Try this: To boost writing skills, challenge students to write a "sequel haiku" that makes use of Robby's two terrific characters. Grade 4-8 Winner (English): "Honor of My Ancestors" In this compelling memoir poem, fifth-grader Michael Liu describes the Chinese tradition of burning money to honor departed family members. But just because the poem was pulled from a personal memory bank doesn't mean it was easy to write. "Honor of My Ancestors" succeeds due to careful craftsmanship, clear storytelling, and spot-on word choice such as the fire that "shines deep red/dark orange." It also succeeds due to artful line breaks--the powerful words waft across the page like the burning paper money described in the poem. Try this: To help students understand line breaks, write each word of the poem on a separate index card. Then, invite students to "play" with the cards and re-break the poem. Grade K-3 Winner (Spanish): "Vaciones de Invierno" ("Winter Vacations") This spirited poem by third-grader Rose Jimenez is a stunner stunner device used in abattoirs to stun an animal so that it is unconscious when it is bled out. concussion stunner a captive-bolt, nonpenetrating device, activated by a standard bullet. in English and Spanish! If you don't speak Spanish, invite any native speakers to help you read the Spanish version aloud. You'll hear that lines A and C end in rhyme (invierno/eterno) as do lines B and D (diferentes/gentes), which will no doubt be music to your students' ears. Then take a look at the English translation to discuss the poem's "story." During winter vacation, the speaker is housebound house·bound adj. Confined to one's home, as by illness. politically correct Politically sensitive adjective due to rain, rain, and more rain. Still she manages to keep her sense of humor Noun 1. sense of humor - the trait of appreciating (and being able to express) the humorous; "she didn't appreciate my humor"; "you can't survive in the army without a sense of humor" sense of humour, humor, humour , describing her parents' greeting of "Good morning!" as an "alarm clock." Tell students that metaphor is a staple of many memorable poems. Try this: Build oral fluency by asking teams of students to prepare a choral reading of "Winter Vacations" in both languages. For the reading, partner Spanish speakers with non-Spanish speakers, if possible. Grade 4-8 Winner (Spanish): "Los Lagartos" ("The Lizards") "Los Lagartos" by fourth-grader Carlos Rivas-Lopez is proof positive that poems can be poignant and laugh-out-loud funny at the same time. Enlist native speakers to help you read the Spanish version aloud. Kids will savor the lovely-sounding words such as colina, agarro, and lagarto. Then share the translation. "Los Lagartos" is an example of the Hispanic tradition of "magical realism," which combines both realistic and magical elements in the story. It's doubtful that the speaker really wore the lizards as earrings, but the poem is so well crafted that the reader is ready, willing, and able to delight in this amazing turn of events. Try this: Encourage children to use this poem as a model to write their own magical-realism poems in which they "wear" an animal of their choice. RELATED ARTICLE: THIS YEAR'S WINNERS AND RUNNERS-UP Top Winners Don't Worry by Robby Maes, Gr. 1, Esperanza Elementary School, Farmington, NM Honor of My Ancestors by Michael Liu, Gr. 5, Village Elementary School, Princeton Junction, NJ Vaciones de Invierno (Winter Vacations) by Rose Jimenez, Gr. 3, Greenwood Elementary School Greenwood Elementary is a public elementary school in Greenwood, British Columbia part of School District 51 Boundary. , Montebello, CA Los Lagartos (The Lizards) by Carlos Rivas-Lopez, Gr. 4, McGlone Elementary School, Denver, CO Runners-Up CATEGORY: ENGLISH K-3 Ode to the Moon by Joann Tran, Gr. 3, Gratten Elementary School, San Francisco, CA April by Rachel Briner, Gr. 2, Columbia Independent School Columbia Independent School is a private school in Columbia, Missouri that teaches Kindergarten through Twelfth grade. About Columbia Independent is a college preparatory school that emphasizes academics, integrity, and leadership. , Columbia, MO Don't Feel So Good by Destiny Stone, Gr. 2, Holly Springs Primary School, Holly Springs, MS Tulip by Stacey Yoon, Gr. 1, Crestview Elementary School Crestview Elementary School (Pre School-5) is one of the Henrico County Public Schools. , San Antonio, TX Fencing by, Hanna Elder, Gr. 2, Clarendon Elementary School, Portland, OR CATEGORY: ENGLISH 4-8 The Tree Dome by Emma Weinstein, Gr. 6, Gardner School, Gardner, CO Lunch Time by Maddie Woods, Gr. 5, Francis Parker School, San Diego, CA Cold Warmth by Hannah Glover, Gr. 8, Oyster River Middle School, Durham, NH Leaves by Emily Claytor, Gr. 4, Forsyth School, St. Louis, MO Alice in Wonderland Haiku by Katherine Snyder, Gr. 8, Buddy Taylor Middle School Taylor Middle School is a middle school located in Millbrae, California. Taylor received the California Distinguished School Award in 1986, 1994, and 2001. Taylor Middle School was the national Blue Ribbon School built by the Works Progress Administration in 1939 and 1996. , Palm Coast, FL CATEGORY: SPANISH K-3 El Otono (The Fall) by Keishla Ortiz, Gr. 2, Welch Annex Dual Language School, New Haven, CT Oklahoma by Samuel Taylor, Gr. 1, Eisenhower International School, Tulsa, OK La Luna (The Moon) by Mackinlee Allen, Gr. 1, Eisenhower International School, Tulsa, OK El Otono (The Fall) by Kathiana Torres-Quinones, Gr. 1, Welch Annex Dual Language School, New Haven, CT Tortugas (Turtles) by Michael Pannell, Gr. 3, Mesita Elementary School, El Paso, TX CATEGORY: SPANISH 4-8 Al Son de Las Hojas (The Beat of the Leaves) by Miguel Salas, Gr. 4, McGlone Elementary School, Denver, CO Cerca de la Paz (Near Peace) by Gary Castellanos, Gr. 5 Hillside Elementary School Hillside Elementary School is a now-closed public elementary school located in the hills section of Berkeley, California. It sits on the block bounded by Le Roy Avenue, Buena Vista Way and La Loma Avenue. Hillside is registered as a local historic landmark. , Roswell, GA Canario (Canary) by Osvaldo Orozco, Gr. 6, Carr Astro Intermediate School, Santa Ana, CA El Tiempo (Time) by Israel Garcia, Gr. 7, Hortman Middle School, Houston, TX Mi Alma (My Soul) by Martin Contreras, Gr. 4, Sherman Oaks Charter School, San Jose, CA Read the full text of all the winning poems online at www.scholastic.com/instructor! Liza Charlesworth is a poet and the author of several books, including 25 Reproducible Mini-Books That Give Kids a Great Start in Reading (Scholastic, 2005). |
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