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Always a Reckoning and Other Poems.


There are two foolproof ways of getting your unpublishable un·pub·lish·a·ble  
adj.
Unfit for publication: an unpublishable manuscript.

Adj. 1. unpublishable - not suitable for publication
publishable - suitable for publication
 poetry published. One is to be some sort of irrelevant celebrity, e.g., movie star (Jimmy Stewart), wife of a famous aviator (Anne Morrow Lindbergh Anne Morrow Lindbergh (June 22, 1906, Englewood, New Jersey – February 7, 2001, Passumpsic, Vermont) was a pioneering American aviator, author, and the spouse of fellow aviator Charles Lindbergh. ), or Pope (Karol Wojtyla, a/k/a John Paul II John Paul II, 1920–2005, pope (1978–2005), a Pole (b. Wadowice) named Karol Józef Wojtyła; successor of John Paul I. He was the first non-Italian pope elected since the Dutch Adrian VI (1522–23) and the first Polish and Slavic pope. ). If this route isn't available to you, try dual entitlement, such as being both black and female. This has worked wonders for the likes of Maya Angelou, June Jordan, Ntozake Shange, Alice Walker, and many others. I have a certain soft spot for Gwendolyn Brooks, however, if only for watching her pass out from the free fruit punch served at the White House on Poetry Day.

On that Poetry Day, I met Jimmy Carter, then merely President, but now peacemaker as well as published poet, Times Books having brought out Always a Reckoning and Other Poems. I wouldn't be surprised if he had discovered his published poet's mission on that very day, when in every room of the White House you could hear published poets spouting spout·ing  
n. Chiefly Pennsylvania & New Jersey
See gutter. See Regional Note at gutter.


spouting
Noun

NZ
a.
 their verse, some of it respectable, some of it good only for eliciting the response, "Heavens to Betsy Heavens to Betsy (H2B for short) was a punk rock band from Olympia, Washington.

The members were Tracy Sawyer on drums and occasionally bass guitar, and Corin Tucker on guitar and vocals.
, I can write stuff as good as that!"

Jimmy Carter, as the author's note reminds us, has published other books, some in collaboration with his wife, but those were in prose. That was a smart move: no matter how bad prose is, it is still, as Moliere's M. Jourdain discovered, prose. But bad poetry is not poetry; it is nothing. At most, some sort of text printed in short lines down the middle of each page. This has two seeming advantages: it looks like poetry, and it fills a book faster than stuff that has to cover the entire page. Moreover, in the old days, to impress folks, it had to adhere to strict form. Nowadays, however, thanks to the pioneering efforts of such stars as the poet-playwright Miss Shange, the poet-inauguralist Miss Angelou, and the poet-professor Miss Jordan (one of whose effusions begins: "5 shirts / 2 blouses / 3 pairs of jeans and the iron's on hot / for cotton"), a much greater freedom has been gained, making it easier for everyone.

So one of Jimmy Carter's poems starts out "in a musty attic box I found / letters of my family in the War - / from places like Bull Run and Gettysburg / and places seldom mentioned in the books." As you can see, this is not a laundry- (or ironing-) list poem, but a newer genre, the letters-in-the-attic-box poem, and just as potent. It even bears the vatic vat·ic   also vat·i·cal
adj.
Of or characteristic of a prophet; oracular.



[From Latin vt
 title "The More Things Change." The humble Civil War epistolarians "served a cause and often gave their lives / not knowing how to tell the history / they made, except a private's point of view / set down in a simple line or two." Clearly, the ancestors inspired our poet to tell the history he made, not from a private's but from a Commander-in-Chief's point of view, yet also set down in a simple line or two.

These forty-odd mostly short poems - only three of them longer than the two-page (prose) dedication to the poet's family, friends, and various unnamed people, including the "readers of this book" - fall into four sections: "People," "Places," "Polities," and "Private Lives." All these P-headed rubrics are very nearly interchangeable, most of the poems really being pro,, anecdotes that could fit into several of the categories. There are reminiscences of growing up in Plains, Georgia; of friends black and white; of hunting and fishing; of growing peanuts, and harvesting and selling them; of family (father, mother, wife, but no offspring); of a favorite hound dying, "nose and eyes still holding on the point"; and of itinerant songsters coming to visit the village, after which "I wished to write / in fumbling lines why we should care / about a distant starving child."

There are also autobiographical poems about local politics and Washington, poems about travel in the air ("Flying to Japan and Seeing Mount Fuji Above the Clouds"), and undersea ("Life on a Killer Submarine"), where Carter served, and quite a few about people being exploited, abused, imprisoned im·pris·on  
tr.v. im·pris·oned, im·pris·on·ing, im·pris·ons
To put in or as if in prison; confine.



[Middle English emprisonen, from Old French emprisoner : en-
, and killed in sundry parts of the world. There are poems about Mother Lillian's nursing career and treatment of a young leper leper /lep·er/ (lep´er) a person with leprosy; a term now in disfavor.

lep·er
n.
One who has leprosy.
, about Father Earl's severity, hunting prowess, and death by cancer; about not finding Dylan Thomas memorialized in Westminster Abbey, and doing something about it; about "One, Now Gone, Who Always Let His Hunting Partner Claim a Downed Bird" ("A rarity / who showed us what agape means"); also philosophical ones, e.g., "A Contemplation of What Has Been Created, and Why," and "Considering the Void" (which ends: "knowing that this galaxy of ours / is one of multitudes / in what we call the heavens, / it troubles me. It troubles me"); and one "On Using Words," which runs in toto:

I first heard jumbled sounds before they framed my infant thoughts and didn't know beliefs and dreams would ride on random consonants and vowels in the air.

Now when I seek efficient words to say what I believe is true or have a dream I want to share the uagueness is still there.

The terms that best describe these pieces are "anecdotal," "concerned," and "disarming." They testify to the niceness of a guy talking about people, issues, incidents from his life (e.g., bird watching from the White House roof), and there is hardly one among them that wouldn't appeal to the Nobel Peace Prize The Nobel Peace Prize (Swedish and Norwegian: Nobels fredspris) is the name of one of five Nobel Prizes bequeathed by the Swedish industrialist and inventor Alfred Nobel.  jury, and not a single one that, in anything but superficies SUPERFICIES. A Latin word used among civilians. It signifies in the edict of the praetor whatever has been erected on the soil, quidquid solo inoedificdtum est. Vide Dig. 43, tit. 18, 1. 1 and 2. , re sembles a poem. Here is a stanza fro "Of Possum and Fatback fat·back  
n.
The strip of fat from the upper part of a side of pork, usually dried and salt-cured.

Noun 1. fatback - salt pork from the back of a hog carcass
," about possum hunting in Mr. Carter's youth:

Each man hoped to take one back to put in his own kitchen pot. The dog race was a real contest since that was how good meals were got. The top hound's family ate the best. Fatback was the usual fare, boiled for taste or fried for grease, so wild game brought a welcome change with cornpone, collard greens Noun 1. collard greens - kale that has smooth leaves
collards

cole, kail, kale - coarse curly-leafed cabbage
, and peas.

Possum hunting, then - along with the sight of geese flying in formation and the song of whales, a racist curse and a battle prayer - is among the "simple themes" Carter advocates, along with a pony, Mama as a nurse, and a postern gate. Thus "I learned from poetry that art / is best derived from artless things." Yet these artless things can also lead to overconfidence o·ver·con·fi·dent  
adj.
Excessively confident; presumptuous.



over·con
 and a certain smugness (often disguised as false modesty), as when Mr. Carter listens to the advice of an old black female retainer who tells him "what she thought I ought to do / in Washington, where I was working then." How charmingly offhand off·hand  
adv.
Without preparation or forethought; extemporaneously.

adj. also off·hand·ed
Performed or expressed without preparation or forethought. See Synonyms at extemporaneous.
 and modest! But omniscience Omniscience
Ea

shrewd god; knew everything in advance. [Babylonian Myth.: Gilgamesh]

God

knows all: past, present, and future.
 will out, as in "Battle Prayer," which runs in its entirety:

All those at war Pray to obtain God's blessing. It's with those in pain.

It may also be with those who know just where that blessing is. I, in my ignorance, would have guessed it was with those who, like a later President whose art is the saxophone, managed to elude the war altogether.

Unfortunately, there are no poems here welling up from that lust in the heart our poet confessed to in a Playboy interview. But there are three anodyne anodyne /an·o·dyne/ (an´ah-din)
1. relieving pain.

2. a medicine that eases pain.


an·o·dyne
n.
An agent that relieves pain.
 and uxorious ux·o·ri·ous  
adj.
Excessively submissive or devoted to one's wife.



[From Latin uxrius, from uxor, wife.
 love poems to his wife, Rosalynn, one of which ends: "With shyness gone and hair caressed with gray, / her smile still makes the birds forget to sing / and me to hear their song." A misdirected smile, I'd say; better it had encouraged the birds and made the bard forget to sing.

But perhaps one of the problems with this poetry is that it is as plain as Plains, Georgia. Modern poetry, as some celebrity bards have discovered, needs a bit of obscurity. Carter might consider the ending of a poem, "Girl Disappointed in Love," by the future Pope John Paul II Pope John Paul II (Latin: Ioannes Paulus PP. II, Italian: Giovanni Paolo II, Polish: Jan Paweł II) born Karol Józef Wojtyła  : "The human heart - what is it for? / Cosmic temperature. Heart, Mercury." Now, that has the right quality of Vatican vaticination about it; it is not only pithy pith·y  
adj. pith·i·er, pith·i·est
1. Precisely meaningful; forceful and brief: a pithy comment.

2. Consisting of or resembling pith.
, it is also Pythian.

Still, such as they are, the poems in Always a Reckoning are vastly superior to the illustrations that accompany them, by an award-winning San Francisco high-school artist, Sarah Elizabeth Choldenko, whose drawings are two steps above stick figures. Her identity is revealed in a note about the author, described as "the proud grandfather of the illustrator." It is good to know that not only talent but also its opposite can be inherited and published. It widens the field.
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