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A sample contrastive analysis of "The Blue Hotel" by Stephen Crane and "The Nigger of the 'Narcissus'" by Joseph Conrad.


The purpose of the present paper is to show the striking similarities between "The Blue Hotel" by Stephen Crane and "The Nigger of the 'Narcissus"' by Joseph Conrad. There seems to exist a close dialogue between the two stories, published over a short period of time, in the late 1898 and 1897 respectively.

The relationship between Crane and Conrad begins in October 1897, shortly before the two publications, when the first was introduced to the latter by S. S. Pawling of the publishing company of William Heinemann William Heinemann (18 May 1863 – 5 October 1920) was the founder of the Heinemann publishing house in London.

He was born in 1863, in Surbiton, Surrey. In his early life he wanted to be a musician, either as a performer or a composer, but, realising that he lacked the
 (Beer 1923). Conrad records that towards the evening they "parted with just a handshake and a goodnight" no more -- without making any arrangements for meeting again, as though we had lived in the same town from childhood and were sure to run across each other next day. It struck me [Conrad] directly I left him that we had not even exchanged addresses: but I was not uneasy. Sure enough, before the month was out there arrived a postcard /from Ravensbrook/ whether he might come to see us" (Stallman, Gilkes 1960). From the very first day they were bound to be friends.

Conrad continued to be Crane's friend till Crane's early death. Notably, as Crane's letters testify, he would often present himself as an inferior writer, even though it was generally thought, and not quite groundlessly, that Conrad put the seal of authority on Crane's writing. But still it must be noted that Conrad would often be interested to know Crane's opinions of his own work. When "Nigger of the 'Narcissus'" appeared in Henley's New Review in 1897, Conrad, already familiar with The Red Badge red badge

symbol of the conquest of fear. [Am. Lit.: Red Badge of Courage]

See : Bravery
 of Courage, considered Crane as "eminently fit to pronounce judgement on my first consciously planned attempt to render the truth of a phase of life in the terms of my own temperament with all the sincerity of which I was capable" (Beer 1923: 211). Crane, having read the story serially in the New Review, wrote Conrad on November 11:

The book is simply great. The simple treatment of the death of Waite is too good, too terrible. I wanted to forget it at once. It caught me very hard. I felt ill over that red thread lining from the corner of the mans mouth to his chin. It was frightful with the weight of a real and present death. By such small means does the real writer suddenly flash out in the sky above those who are always doing rather well (Stallman, Gilkes 1960: 149-150).

Conrad was glad Crane liked the story, of which he informed Crane on the 16th. From the same letter it can be seen that Conrad did not expect mere flattery Flattery
Adams, Jack

toady to his employer. [Br. Lit.: Dombey and Son]

Amaziah

fawningly complains of Amos to King Jeroboam. [O.T.: Amos 7:10]

bolton

one who flatters by pretending humility. [Br. Hist.
 but was seriously interested in Crane's opinion on different aspects of "The Nigger of the 'Narcissus'". Conrad writes:

I was anxious to know what you would think of the end [...]. I mean after the death. All that rigmarole rig·ma·role   also rig·a·ma·role
n.
1. Confused, rambling, or incoherent discourse; nonsense.

2. A complicated, petty set of procedures.
 about the burial and the ship's coming home seems to run away into a rat's tail The Rat's tail (Babiana ringens) is a flowering plant native to South Africa. The foliage is long and erect with a sterile main stalk. The plant bears bright red, tubular flowers on side branches close to the ground. It grows in sandy soil.  -- thin at the end. Well! It's too late now to bite my thumbs and tear my hair. When I feel depressed about it I say to myself: "Crane likes the damned thing" -- and I am greatly consoled [...] I ask myself whether you meant half of what you said!" (Stallman, Gilkes 1960: 151)

Probably Crane did mean what he said about the Nigger because not much later he would defend Conrad against critical response to it. Late in December he quarrelled with Frederick over Conrad's work. Beer reports that Crane crashed his revolver down upon a dessert plate and yelled: "You and I and Kipling couldn't have written the Nigger!" (Beer 1923: 330) This incident followed an unsigned, unfavorable review of "The Nigger of the 'Narcissus'" in the Saturday Review For other uses, see Saturday Review (disambiguation).

Saturday Review (1924–1986) was a weekly U.S.-based magazine. Originally known as The Saturday Review of Literature (until 1952), it was established by Henry Seidel Canby from the
, written by Frederick. As "The Blue Hotel" shows, published in 1899 in a volume The Monster and Other Stories, Crane, consciously or not, employed Conrad's theme in writing his own story.

Of course Stephen Crane and Joseph Conrad are not linked by mere ideas for their works. In fact, Crane's artistic credo is not very different from that of Conrad. In a letter to John Northern Hillary Crane writes that:

a man is born into the world with his own pair of eyes, and he is not at all responsible for his vision -- he is merely responsible for the quality of personal honesty. To keep close to this personal honesty is my supreme ambition [...] A man is sure to fail at it, but there is something in the failure (Stallman, Gilkes 1960: 110).

The very same dictum [Latin, A remark.] A statement, comment, or opinion. An abbreviated version of obiter dictum, "a remark by the way," which is a collateral opinion stated by a judge in the decision of a case concerning legal matters that do not directly involve the facts or affect the  forms part of Conrad's aesthetic credo.

Both Crane and Conrad aimed at conciliating objective reality with subjective vision; in both cases, the final meaning and the total effect as to be achieved by reproducing the process of perception and discovery; each "moment of vision" led to the revelation of a certain truth (Conrad 1897).

Stephen Crane's fiction seems indeed to conform to Verb 1. conform to - satisfy a condition or restriction; "Does this paper meet the requirements for the degree?"
fit, meet

coordinate - be co-ordinated; "These activities coordinate well"
 the new principles of impressionistic im·pres·sion·is·tic  
adj.
1. Of, relating to, or practicing impressionism.

2. Of, relating to, or predicated on impression as opposed to reason or fact: impressionistic memories of early childhood.
 writing which were being developed at the time in England by a group of writers including Conrad. The best definition of its aims can indeed be found in Conrad's well-known preface to "The Nigger of the 'Narcissus'". Fiction, Conrad wrote,

if it at all aspires to be art--appeals to temperament [...] Such an appeal to be effective must be an impression conveyed through the senses [...] All art, therefore, appeals primarily to the senses, and the artistic aim when expressing itself in written words must also make its appeal through the senses [...] It must strenuously aspire to aspire to
verb aim for, desire, pursue, hope for, long for, crave, seek out, wish for, dream about, yearn for, hunger for, hanker after, be eager for, set your heart on, set your sights on, be ambitious for
 the plasticity of sculpturc, to the colour of painting, and to the magic suggestiveness of music--which is the art of all arts (Conrad 1897).

In Crane, too, the truth of life is revealed in the "moment of vision" constantly repeated. If art, as Conrad maintained, could be defined as "a single minded attempt to render the highest kind of justice to the visible universe" (Conrad 1897), this was indeed Crane's achievement; Crane too was trying to bring to light the truth underlying its aspects, us form, its colours, its lights and shadows--as Conrad had required in the same preface.

The writer's task is to render and convey to the reader the sense impressions, to capture the fleeting image of life in order to reveal its underlying secret.

Disregarding Conrad's opinion that Crane was "the only impressionist and only an impressionist" (Stallman, Gilkes 1960: 155), which, of course, would not be wholly true from the present perspective, it is still notable that they did share in their fiction a variety of artistic techniques, as will be seen from the present analysis.

"The Blue Hotel" by Stephen Crane and "The Nigger of the 'Narcissus"' by Joseph Conrad are here compared on two different levels. On the one hand they display a similarity in their subject matter, and on the other, they show a similarity in their author's use of imagery. Let us begin with the latter.

The action of Crane's story largely takes place at a hotel which was painted in a light blue, "a shade that is on the legs of a kind of a heron, causing the bird (1) to declare its position against any background" (Crane 1965 [1898]). (1) The colour blue of the hotel signifies alienation, standing out from, insignificance in·sig·nif·i·cance  
n.
The quality or state of being insignificant.

Noun 1. insignificance - the quality of having little or no significance
unimportance - the quality of not being important or worthy of note
 in the universe, which brings the men inside close to the seamen on board 'The Narcissus' who "as common mortals led their busy, insignificant lives" (Conrad 1967 [18971). (2) The hotel is situated on a plain which reminds us of the sea in Conrad; outside there is a raging storm, parallel to the storm in "The Nigger of the 'Narcissus"'. As a matter of fact, in Crane, a storm is a sea, "a turmoiling sea of snow" (BH 183). Crane himself uses a number of nautical terms in his metaphorics which prove this association fully justified. The Swede swede: see turnip.  in Crane's story, "tightly grippling his valise, tacked across the face of the storm as if he carried sails" (BH 204). To leave the hotel means here to pl unge "into the tempest as into a sea" (BH 197). Moreover, bearing in mind that in Crane a storm is a turmoiling sea of snow, it is notable that in Conrad "the white sails of 'The Narcissus' stood out in dazzling cones as of stainless snow" (NN 152), and the ship "struggled upwards over the snowy ridges of great running seas" (NN 55).

As readers, we are struck by the will and fury of the blizzard. The effects of the blizzard are again similar to the effects of the violent storm in Conrad. Its power, like the power of Conrad's sea, ridicules the wraths and pursuits of man, making him insignificant in the universe. In Crane, "the huge arms of the wind were making attempts [...] to embrace the flakes as they sped" (BH 103). Through a careful selection of words, a deep contrast is here achieved between the powerful arms of the wind and the feeble flakes at its mercy. Elsewhere we read that "the wind lore at the house and some loose thing beat regularly against the clap-boards" (BH 186). The word tear including the features: rip and destroy again emphasises the power of the wind which puts in motion something loose. The word loose in this context bring associations like detached, insecure, unsteady, which once again illustrates the relationship of inequality between the wind and its toys. A similar effect is evoked in Conrad where "a big, foami ng sea came out of the mist; it made for the ship, roaring wildly, and in it rush it looked as mischievous and decomposing as a madman with an axe" (NN 63). A similar contrast can be seen here, in this case between the powerful sea and the feeble ship. The seamen "looked wretched and in a hopeless struggle, like vermin vermin /ver·min/ (ver´min)
1. an external animal parasite.

2. such parasites collectively.ver´minous


ver·min
n. pl.
 fleeing before a flood" (NN 64) as "the clouds closed up and the world again became a raging, blind darkness that howled, flinging at the lonely ship salt sprays and sleet sleet, precipitation of small, partially melted grains of ice. As raindrops fall from clouds, they pass through layers of air at different temperatures. If they pass through a layer with a temperature below the freezing point, they turn into sleet. " (NN 61). The simile simile (sĭm`əlē) [Lat.,=likeness], in rhetoric, a figure of speech in which an object is explicitly compared to another object. Robert Burns's poem "A Red Red Rose" contains two straightforward similes:
: "the seamen [...] like vermin fleeing before a flood" and especially the juxtaposition vermin and flood shows that the chances in the struggle are unequal. Moreover, the contrast is brought out in the description of the world. The words rage, howl, and fling, including the features: violence, yell and toss, contrast with the word lonely implying helpless. Furthermore, both the wind in Crane and the storm in Conrail have a quality of madness about them. In Crane this quality shows itself, For example, in the phrase: "some loose thing beat regularly against the clap-boards" (BH 186). Madness is induced by the repeatedness and purposelessness pur·pose·less  
adj.
Lacking a purpose; meaningless or aimless.



purpose·less·ly adv.
 of the activity. In Conrad "the ship tossed about, shaken furiously, like a toy in the hand of a lunatic" (NN 59). The quality is also marked by words like rage and blind containing the feature, and metaphors like the simile: "it looked [...] as a madman with an axe" (NN 63). In both cases madness is a prominent feature of the elements.

In both works the storm can hinder verbal communication. The cook aboard the 'Narcissus', propped by the water cask, "sat to leeward Noun 1. to leeward - the side sheltered from the wind
leeward side

leeward - the direction in which the wind is blowing
, and yelled back abundantly, but the seas were breaking in just then, and we only caught snatches that sounded like: "Providence" and "born again"" (NN 69). The wind in Crane "tore the words from Scully's lips and scattered them far alee a·lee  
adv.
At, on, or to the leeward side.

Adv. 1. alee - on or toward the lee; "put the helm alee"
" (BH 198), and later we read that "the storm also seized the remainder of this sentence" (BH 198), and it was impossible "to equal the roar of the storm" (BR 197), and the residentes of the hotel were forced to approach the blizzard outside with respect. In Conrad alike, "in all that crowd of cold and hungry men, not a voice was heard" (N N 67). The sailors "were mute, and in sombre som·bre  
adj. Chiefly British
Variant of somber.


sombre or US somber
Adjective

1. serious, sad, or gloomy: a sombre message

2.
 thoughtfulness listened to the horrible imprecations of the gale" (NN 67) as it was "no good bein' angry with the winds of heaven" (NN 59).

The realities outside the hotel and aboard the 'Narcissus' arc also reflected within the hotel and aboard the ship. The word fort present in the place name "Fort Romper" includes the semantic components: warfare, strategy, defence, fighting, violence, and as such, it hints right at the beginning of the story that the hotel is not going to be a quiet and cosy one, like no sailor can expect to find shelter in the confines of his cabin while there is a raging storm outside. In both Crane and Conrad an element of tumult is strongly present. In Conrad this fact could be fully illustrated and justified solely on the literal level but it is surprising that the inside of the hotel should not be free of tumult. And yet the stove inside the room of the hotel "was humming with godlike god·like  
adj.
Resembling or of the nature of a god or God; divine.



godlike
 violence" (BH 182). In the room where Johnnie and the farmer are "quarrelling", there is "impatience" and "irritation", and with "a loud flourish of words Scully destroyed the game of cards" (BH 182). Crane's language here is very intense, the words quarrelling, impatience and irritation bring associations of strong emotion, anger, displeasure and antagonism. A "flourish" alike contains the features intense and dramatic, and when Scully comes upon the scene he does not stop their gambling himself, but "destroys" the game and "bustles" his son upstairs (BH 182); both words contain intense and dramatic. Destroy again, seems to be a carefully chosen word which contains the features force and power - it implies complete destruction and excessive behaviour using more violence than is presumably pre·sum·a·ble  
adj.
That can be presumed or taken for granted; reasonable as a supposition: presumable causes of the disaster.
 needed. Expressions applicable to describe a war are frequent in the story, for example: "a plan seemed to strike him" (BH 189), "laughing bravely" (BH 182), "for a moment their glances crossed like blades" (BH 194). In Conrad, too, an atmosphere of tension is created, here on board the ship, and it lasts even while the sea is calm. Wait's cough is described to be "metallic" and "tremendously loud", resounding re·sound  
v. re·sound·ed, re·sound·ing, re·sounds

v.intr.
1. To be filled with sound; reverberate: The schoolyard resounded with the laughter of children.

2.
 like "explosions" (NN 25) and his voice make "al l the saucepans ring" (NN 100), and Mr Baker grunts in a manner "bloodthirsty blood·thirst·y  
adj.
1. Eager to shed blood.

2. Characterized by great carnage.



blood
 and innocuous" (NN 38). Belfast is constantly ready for a fight, Donkin answers in "hissing whispers" (NN 47), doors slam, and men snap at Verb 1. snap at - bite off with a quick bite; "The dog snapped off a piece of cloth from the intruder's pants"
bite off

bite, seize with teeth - to grip, cut off, or tear with or as if with the teeth or jaws; "Gunny invariably tried to bite her"
 one another. Towards the end of the story Donkin can feel "the fatal antagonism of all the surrounding existences" (NN 157), and has a desire "to break, to crush; to be even with everybody for everything; to tear the veil, unmask, expose, leave no refuge" (NN 157). Wait stands "battling single-handed with a legion of nameless terrors" (NN 125), the sails "keep on rattling like a discharge of musketry mus·ket·ry  
n.
1. The technique of using small arms.

2. Muskets considered as a group.

3. Musketeers considered as a group.


musketry
the art or skill of using muskets.
" (NN 131) and even a biscuit "flung at Jimmy's head" strikes "with a loud crack the bulkhead beyond" bursting "like a hand-grenade into flying pieces" (NN 159). James Wait falls back on the pillow "as if wounded mortally" (NN 159). The use of expressions containing the features tumult and military in the two stories signal mutually that life is a war.

Furthermore, in both stories, a dialogue on the theme of game is clearly observable. The arrival of the Swede at "The Blue Hotel" is followed by a game of cards. The game is foretold fore·told  
v.
Past tense and past participle of foretell.
 in the story by the word romper in the place name "Fort Romper" which includes the features play and winning as well as boisterous and tumult. At the game the Swede suddenly realises that he is being cheated. On this realisation he gradually begins to believe that he is going to be killed. At first he merely remarks: "Oh, I see you are all against me" (BH 185) and finally quavers This article is about the cheese-flavoured snack food. For the type of musical note, see quaver.

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: "Gentlemen, I suppose I am going to be killed before I can leave this house!" (BH 186) James Wait as he enlists aboard the 'Narcissus' also enters a kind of game. He poses as a very ill person hoping to find a comfortable and quiet place for the time of the voyage. That he is only shamming ill we may suspect from the fact that he only coughs "when it best suits him" (NN 25), as one of the crew members observes, and that one of his first question concern ing the organisation on the ship relates to food: "Is your cook a coloured gentleman?" (NN 25) Captain Allistoun tells Jimmy: "There's nothing the matter with you, but you choose to lie-up to please yourself" (NN 126). As at the beginning of the voyage he may have been only pretending to be terminally ill Terminally Ill

When a person is not expected to live more than 12 months.

Notes:
Any gifts given out by the afflicted person at this time may be considered as a dispersion of the estate rather than a gift.
, halfway through the story he already believes that he is actually going to die before the ship reaches land, like Crane's Swede believes he is going to he killed before he can leave the hotel. Like in the case of the Swede, Jim accuses the other sailors of the intention to poison him: "You would poison me!" (NN 44) he shouts.

The Swede's and Jim Wait's deaths seem inevitable as they are signalled in the language of the two stories. In "The Blue Hotel" we read that the Swede has "two spots brightly crimson" (BH 188) on his cheeks to forewarn fore·warn  
tr.v. fore·warned, fore·warn·ing, fore·warns
To warn in advance.


forewarn
Verb

to warn beforehand

Verb 1.
 us that he is doomed to die, and there is a red light outside the saloon where he is eventually killed. Moreover, he has "deathly death·ly  
adj.
1. Of, resembling, or characteristic of death: a deathly silence.

2. Causing death; fatal.

adv.
1. In the manner of death.

2.
 pale cheeks" (BH 188) and his teeth "showed like a dead man's" (BH 189). Scully declares Johnnie whipped in "the tone of the most simple and deadly announcements" (BH 201). And then we read that Johnnie "buried his face in his arms" (BH 201), and later they bore Johnnie away "as you would carry a corpse" (BH 202). There are also expressions implying ghostly and spiritual matters, such as: "he (The Swede) was like a demoniac de·mo·ni·ac   also de·mo·ni·a·cal
adj.
1. Possessed, produced, or influenced by a demon: demoniac creatures.

2.
" (BH 196) or "some loose thing beat regularly [...] like a spirit tapping" (BH 186). The Swede commenting on how he almost killed Johnnie says: "I thumped the soul out of the man" (BH 205). "The Nigger of the 'Narcissus"' also contains the figure death. James Wait's first fit of coughing, symptoms of his illness, resounds in. the forecastle "like two explosions in a vault" (NN 25). Trapped in his cabin during the storm, Wait is heard "screaming and knocking below us with the hurry of a man prematurely shut up in a coffin" (NN 72). And the Wait was "as quiet as a dead man inside a grave" (NN 72) and the sailors were "like a lot of drunken men embarrassed with a stolen corpse" (NN 78). As they rescued Jimmy, the sun was setting, "an enormous, unclouded and red" (NN 81), and the sky had "the purple stain of the high land" (NN 102). The sailors, "like men standing above a grave" were "on the verge On the Verge (or The Geography of Yearning) is a play written by Eric Overmyer. It makes extensive use of esoteric language and pop culture references from the late nineteenth century to 1955.  of tears" (NN 120). The image of death is also resident on the forecastle itself: "The double row of berths yawned black, like graves tenanted by uneasy corpses" (NN 28), and there was "a leg hung over the edge very white and lifeless" (NN 28). The bodies of the crew were lost in the gloom of the berths "that resembled narrow niches for coffins in a whitewashed and lighted mortuary" (NN 14). Mr Baker in the dark, on all fours among the dormant men, resembles "some carnivorous car·niv·o·rous  
adj.
1. Of or relating to carnivores.

2. Flesh-eating or predatory: a carnivorous bird.

3.
 animal prowling prowl  
v. prowled, prowl·ing, prowls

v.tr.
To roam through stealthily, as in search of prey or plunder: prowled the alleys of the city after dark.

v.intr.
 amongst the corpses" (NN 85), and his voice "seemed to break through a deadly spell" (NN 91). As Donkin emerges from the cabin in which Jimmy has expired, the image of the grave defines his first impression: "Sleeping men, huddled under jackets, made on the lighted deck mounds that had the appearance of neglected graves" (NN 75). The forecastle of the 'Narcissus' is once said to be "quiet as a sepulchre SEPULCHRE. The place where a corpse is buried. The violation of sepulchres is a misdemeanor at common law. Vide Dead bodies. " (NN 31), and much later we see Singleton looming in the smoky forecastle "like a statue of heroic size in the gloom of a crypt" (NN 135). Inanimate objects Inanimate Objects

abiology

the study of inanimate things.

animatism

the assignment to inanimate objects, forces, and plants of personalities and wills, but not souls. — animatistic, adj.
 are also affected by the contagion Contagion

The likelihood of significant economic changes in one country spreading to other countries. This can refer to either economic booms or economic crises.

Notes:
An infamous example is the "Asian Contagion" that occurred in 1997 and started in Thailand.
, and the image takes on an image of violence and mutilation Mutilation
See also Brutality, Cruelty.

Mutiny (See REBELLION.)

Absyrtus

hacked to death; body pieces strewn about. [Gk. Myth.: Walsh Classical, 3]

Agatha, St.

had breasts cut off. [Christian Hagiog.
: "Hung up suits of oilskin swung out and in lively and disquieting dis·qui·et  
tr.v. dis·qui·et·ed, dis·qui·et·ing, dis·qui·ets
To deprive of peace or rest; trouble.

n.
Absence of peace or rest; anxiety.

adj. Archaic
Uneasy; restless.
 like reckless ghosts of decapitated de·cap·i·tate  
tr.v. de·cap·i·tat·ed, de·cap·i·tat·ing, de·cap·i·tates
To cut off the head of; behead.



[Late Latin d
 seamen dancing in a tempest" (NN 120). The expression "seamen dancing in a tempest" might further suggest that the sailors are in volved in danse macabre danse macabre: see Death, Dance of.

danse macabre

Dance of Death; procession of all on their way to the grave. [Art: Osborne, 299–300, 677]

See : Death


Danse Macabre
. In "The Nigger of the 'Narcissus"' the image of death is also becoming more vivid as the story develops; "In the evenings the cleared decks had a reposeful re·pose·ful  
adj.
Marked by, conducive to, or expressing repose.



re·poseful·ly adv.
 aspect, resembling the autumn of the earth" (NN 38), and then "on clear evenings the silent ship, under the cold sheen of the dead moon, took on a false aspect of passionless repose, resembling the winter of the earth" (NN 152).

Metaphors evoking religious associations are also present in both "The Blue Hotel" and "The Nigger of the 'Narcissus"'. Bearing in mind that the room inside the hotel is small, it is remarkable that Scully leads his guests through "the portals" (BR 182). The word portals would normally not be used in this context as it suggests an entrance of imposing appearance, as to a palace or a temple. As a matter of fact, later on we read that the room "seemed to be merely a proper temple for an enormous stove" (BR 182) which is in the centre. The similarity of the stove to an alter is striking. Crane explicitly calls the different procedures that the visitors go through "ceremonies" (BH 182), accentuating the features ritual, religious, sacred. In Conrad spiritual matters are signalled in the metaphorics which generally does not possess such a degree of independence of the Figure death, but very similar examples can also be found. The forecastle of the 'Narcissus' is once "quiet as a cathedral" (NN 112) and the etiquet te of the forecastle required of the sailors "ceremonious cer·e·mo·ni·ous  
adj.
1. Strictly observant of or devoted to ceremony, ritual, or etiquette; punctilious: "borne on silvery trays by ceremonious world-weary waiters" Financial Times.
 silence" (NN 48). The sailors "spoke in low tones within the fo'c'sle as though it had been a church" (NN 43). Captain Allistoun rises at night "out of the darkness of the companion, such as a phantom above a grave" (NN 37). At the height of the storm a suddon gust catches the men in the rigging and pins "all up the shrouds the whole crawling line in attitudes of crucifixion" (NN 62).

There is also a striking similarity between the two stories in the image of hell. The room at The Bluc Hotel should be heaven in the blizzard, but instead it seems indeed more like hell. Scully himself, with his pointed, stiff ears makes us think of Mephistopheles. He is presented to us as a master of strategy that can "work his seductions upon any man that he might see wavering, gripsack in hand" (BR 181), as if he were eager to seduce se·duce  
tr.v. se·duced, se·duc·ing, se·duc·es
1. To lead away from duty, accepted principles, or proper conduct. See Synonyms at lure.

2. To induce to engage in sex.

3.
a.
 those who are likely to succumb to his temptation, the word wavering including the features indecisive in·de·ci·sive  
adj.
1. Prone to or characterized by indecision; irresolute: an indecisive manager.

2. Inconclusive: an indecisive contest; an indecisive battle.
, irresolute ir·res·o·lute  
adj.
1. Unsure of how to act or proceed; undecided.

2. Lacking in resolution; indecisive.



ir·res
, uncertain, uncommitted. As Scully is "conducting" his guests through various procedures, expressions like "conferring great favours" (BR 182), "benevolent" (BR 182) and "philanthropic impulse" (BH 182) are used. Scully appears to be exaggeratedly benign, as if he were treacherously tempting his guests. The stove in the room, as if opposing this attempt, is humming with '"god-like' violence" (BR 182). Many words in the story speak of fire, adding to the image of h ell, for example: they "burnished bur·nish  
tr.v. bur·nished, bur·nish·ing, bur·nish·es
1. To make smooth or glossy by or as if by rubbing; polish.

2. To rub with a tool that serves especially to smooth or polish.

n.
 themselves fiery red" (BH 182), the old farmer frequently addresses "a glowing commonplace to the strangers" (BH 183). Other expressions of the same nature include the following: "ain't he bold as blazes" (BH 190), "he kept his glance burning with hatred" (BH 190), the Swede "fizzed like a fire-wheel" (BH 193), "as if Scully was going to flame out over the matter" (BR 194). The Easterner east·ern·er also East·ern·er  
n.
A native or inhabitant of the east, especially the eastern United States.


Easterner
Noun

a person from the east of a country or region

Noun 1.
 says: "but he (the Swede) thinks that he's right in the middle of hell" (BH 191). Crane 's characters can hear "the wail of the snow as it was flung to its grave in the south" (BH 201). It is remarkable that the ship in Conrad is subject to an attack of the icy wind that is coming from the south, the ship "piling up the South Latitude" (NN 54); the 'Narcissus' is approaching the Horn Cape which for many seamen throughout history has become their grave, the place itself given the attributes of hell. Furthermore, Aboard the 'Narcissus' there were "sweet scents, a smell of sulphur" red tongues of flames licking a white mist" (NN 122), and the cook exclaims: "Don't you see the everlasting fire!" (NN 123). At night, the ship "with every sail and every rope distinct and black in the centre of a fiery outburst (was) like a charred ship enclosed in a globe of fire" (NN 110). Jimmy himself is often seen as a devil, "with gleaming eyes" (NN 111), making himself "invisible in the midst Adv. 1. in the midst - the middle or central part or point; "in the midst of the forest"; "could he walk out in the midst of his piece?"
midmost
 of an intense darkness" (NN 111). After the first encounter with the nigger the cook would often say: "The poor fellow had scared me. I thought I had seen the devil" (NN 26). Otherwise he is seen to be a devil's victim; when Donkin looked at him "he saw him long, Iean, dried up, as though all his flesh had shrivelled shriv·el  
intr. & tr.v. shriv·eled or shriv·elled, shriv·el·ing or shriv·el·ling, shriv·els
1. To become or make shrunken and wrinkled, often by drying:
 on his bones in the heat of a white furnace" (NN 156, cf. stove in Crane). A furnace might operate here as a traditional furnishing of hell. Other examples adding to the image of hell include: "the glare of the steaming forecastle" (NN 21), "a spark of human pity glimmered yet through the infernal fog of his supr eme conceit conceit, in literature, fanciful or unusual image in which apparently dissimilar things are shown to have a relationship. The Elizabethan poets were fond of Petrarchan conceits, which were conventional comparisons, imitated from the love songs of Petrarch, in which " (NN 21), "lamps [...] shone with a glow like ghosts of some evil moons" (NN 21).

There is also a close dialogue between the two stories on the theme of captivity. In Crane Scully is described as very dominating and compelling. "Scully practically made them prisoners" (BH 182). Expressions containing the feature arc frequent in the story; "I think you are tongue-tied" (BH 188), "but he had the step of one hung in chains" (BH 189). Crane continues: "it would be the height of brutality to try to escape" (BH 182) -- the word "escape" meaning "get free" at the end of this line further reinforces the prisoner image. In the next line Crane depicts the way the four men walk heavily in a line to towards the hotel: "they trudged off [...] in the wake of the eager little Irishman" (BH 182). To trudge is to walk like prisoners, for example, and in fact: "Scully performed the marvel of catching three men" (182). In Conrad alike, the sailors are said to be "life-long prisoners of the sea" (NN 12). James Wait is made a prisoner in his cabin during a storm and then he is forbidden to enter the forecastle by Captain Allistoun. On the other hand, virtually all members of the crew are in various extent Wait's prisoners, as they find Jimmy "blocking" (NN 50) the way -- the word "block" contains the semantic features: barrier, blockade, hindrance. The figure is also present in relation to the inanimate inanimate /in·an·i·mate/ (-an´im-it)
1. without life.

2. lacking in animation.


in·an·i·mate
adj.
 world, for example: "The lamps [...] shone on the end of lofty standards with a glow blinding and frigid frig·id
adj.
1. Extremely cold.

2. Persistently averse to sexual intercourse.
 like captive ghosts" (NN 21).

As can be seen from the above analysis the two works in question are both marked for the presence of tumult, violence, oppression, death, hell, captivity and game, thc features which evoke an atmosphere of awe and fear. In both cases the struggle is first of all that of the central characters of the two works. Conrad's Nigger and Crane's Swede share a number of features and seem to play a similar function.

The first impression we get of the Swede and Wait is that they are both gentlemen, refined in manners, but also arrogant towards those who do not meet their requirements of being exactly as they want them to be. Both appear hypersensitive hy·per·sen·si·tive
adj.
Responding excessively to the stimulus of a foreign agent, such as an allergen; abnormally sensitive.



hy
 to the imagined dangers around them. The Swede, separated from his environment in the same way as The Blue Hotel stands alone in the blizzard, is obsessed ob·sess  
v. ob·sessed, ob·sess·ing, ob·sess·es

v.tr.
To preoccupy the mind of excessively.

v.intr.
 with the imagined dangers of the West, Similarly, James Wait, standing outside the fraternity of seamen (the fact is emphasised by his illness and the colour of his skin) feels himself to be a victim among the sailors who are presented as "the crowd", "the dark group of mustered men". In both cases individuality is projected onto socially stable groups, threatening to disintegrate dis·in·te·grate  
v. dis·in·te·grat·ed, dis·in·te·grat·ing, dis·in·te·grates

v.intr.
1. To become reduced to components, fragments, or particles.

2.
 them as a whole. Wait's refusal to be autonomic autonomic /au·to·nom·ic/ (aw?to-nom´ik) not subject to voluntary control. See under system.

au·to·nom·ic
adj.
1. Functionally independent; not under voluntary control.
, industrious and undiverse on board the ship results in tension between him and the majority and so does the Swede's individualism. In Conrad, Belfast admits that for half a penny he would "knock hi s ugly black head off" (NN 44), and Singleton sneers: "Are you dying? Well get on with your dying [...], don't raise a blamed fuss with us over that job. We can't help you" (NN 49). When Wait is sent back to his cabin by Captain Allistoun, a "burst of laughter followed him... [...]" It was too funny. All hands everybody; all parties.

See also: Hand
 laughed (NN 52). In Crane, Johnnie says of Wait: "I wish pop would throw him out" (BH 191) and the cowboy says; "I hope we don't git snowed in, because then we'd have to stand this here man bein' around with us all the time. That wouldn't be no good" (BH 191), and Johnnie adds: "It's awfully funny" (BH 191). In both cases individuality causes miscommunication mis·com·mu·ni·ca·tion  
n.
1. Lack of clear or adequate communication.

2. An unclear or inadequate communication.
; in Conrad "nobody could tell what would please our incomprehensible invalid" (NN 46), and in Crane Scully sums up the Swede's behaviour with the statement: "It's a muddle" (BH 188), while the cowboy was in a state of "deep stupefaction stu·pe·fac·tion  
n.
1.
a. The act or an instance of stupefying.

b. The state of being stupefied.

2. Great astonishment or consternation.
" (BH 185).

Both the Swede in Crane and James Wait in Conrad are afraid of death that, to their minds, is to become their fate. Ironically, they both get what they were asking for when they least expect it, already feeling safe. The Swede is knived when he feels at home at the radiant bar. In the saloon he subconsciously continues to behave as if he was asking for trouble; for example, he does not agree with the bartender that "the bad night" is bad (BR 205), and at the guests' polite refusal to have a drink with him he "ruffled ruf·fle 1  
n.
1. A strip of frilled or closely pleated fabric used for trimming or decoration.

2. A ruff on a bird.

3.
a. A ruckus or fray.

b. Annoyance; vexation.

4.
 out his chest like a rooster rooster

its crowing at dawn heralds each new day. [Western Folklore: Leach, 329]

See : Dawn


rooster

symbol of maleness. [Folklore: Binder, 85]

See : Virility
" (BR 207). The tone of his voice at this refusal also signals his attitude: "Well, he exploded, it seems I can't get anybody to drink with me in this town" (BH 207). This vast generalisation here is a clear sign of provocation. As a result the Swede is killed by the gambler, falling "with a cry of supreme astonishment" BH 207), as if utterly unconscious of his provocation. "The corpse of the Swede, alone in the saloon, had its eyes fixed upon a dreadful legend that dw elt atop of the cash-mashine:

"This registers thc amount of your purchase"" (BH 208). Similarly, when James Wait begins to feel at home as the ship approaches land, as he thinks of oysters cooked by his girlfriend just thc way as he likes, he is virtually killed by Donkin. Before his death Wait feels "untired, calm, and safely withdrawn within himself beyond the reach of every grave incertitude" (NN 157). In this line the features "rest" and "peace" are invokcd, but they can hardly be interpreted to describe life on earth, they are rather attributes of death. In the next line Conrad writes that "there was something of the immutable IMMUTABLE. What cannot be removed, what is unchangeable. The laws of God being perfect, are immutable, but no human law can be so considered.  quality of eternity in the slow moments of his complete resifidness" (NN 157). The word eternity signals the life beyond, the meaning being reinforced by the phrase complete restfulness rest·ful  
adj.
1. Affording, marked by, or suggesting rest; tranquil. See Synonyms at comfortable.

2. Being at rest; quiet.



rest
.

Both Crane and Conrad thematise in their works the subject of split psychological realities. The Swede's and James Wait's struggle in a hostile surrounding is opposed by the subconscious desire to give in. Moreover, both characters are faced with a dual vision of the world. What they believe to be true is opposed to what they actually perceive. The discrepancy between pro-conceived and the actual leaves the characters in a maze, fighting single-handedly to defend the original conceits of their minds.

And finally, in both works the question of responsibility for an individual is raised. In Crane, the men at The Blue Hotel fail to live up to this responsibility and so the Swede must die, and in Conrad, the sailors, obeying the rules of the sea, can hardly accept those of Wait's. But still, in both cases, the groups are not indifferent to the fate of the individuals and are led to reflect on their attitudes in contact with the Swede and Wait.

It is remarkable that these two stories, written on two different continents, should be so strikingly convergent in their imagery and subject matter, as can be observed from the above sample analysis. Other links have been mentioned by critics - personally, I would mention Conrad's Lord Jim Lord Jim

successful in lifelong efforts to regain honor lost in moment of cowardice. [Br. Lit.: Lord Jim]

See : Noblemindedness


Lord Jim
 (1900) and Crane's The Red Badge of Courage (1895) as particularly interesting - but nowhere else is the convergence more conspicuous than in the works discussed above.

(1.) All quotations from "The Blue Hotel", marked henceforth BH, as in Great Short Works of Stephen Crane published by Harper and Row, Publishers, New York New York, state, United States
New York, Middle Atlantic state of the United States. It is bordered by Vermont, Massachusetts, Connecticut, and the Atlantic Ocean (E), New Jersey and Pennsylvania (S), Lakes Erie and Ontario and the Canadian province of
 1965. All italics mine.

(2.) All qoutations from "The Nigger of the 'Narcissus'", marked henceforth NN, as in The Nigger of the 'Narcissus'" and other Tales published by Oxford University Press, London 1967. All italics mine.

Beer, Thomas Beer, Thomas, 1889–1940, American author, b. Council Bluffs, Iowa, grad. Yale, 1911, and studied law at Columbia, 1911–13. He is best remembered for his biographies of Stephen Crane (1923) and Marcus (Mark) Hanna (1929) and his witty study of American  

1923 Stephen Crane: A study in American Letters. New York. Conrad, Joseph Conrad, Joseph, 1857–1924, English novelist, b. Berdichev, Russia (now Berdychiv, Ukraine), originally named Jósef Teodor Konrad Walecz Korzeniowski.  

1897 "The Nigger of thc 'Narcissus", in: The Nigger of the 'Narcissus' and other Tales. London: Oxford University Press.

[1967] [Reprinted London: Oxford Unveristy Press]. Crane, Stephen Crane, Stephen, 1871–1900, American novelist, poet, and short-story writer, b. Newark, N.J. Often designated the first modern American writer, Crane is ranked among the authors who introduced realism into American literature.  

1898 "The Blue Hotel" in: Great Short Works of Stephen crane. New York: Harper & Row.

[1965] [Reprinted New York: Harper & Row.] Stallman, R. W and Gilkes, Lillian

1960 Stephen Crane: Letters. New York: University Press.
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